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Biology degree personal statement example (1c) with review

This is a real Biology personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

I have always had an interest in science-based subjects, especially those relating to biology. Whilst undertaking my A-level Biology course, the module energy and ecosystems was of particular interest to me. My interest in the natural world, and study of science encouraged me to further my understanding in this area by applying to study environmental biology at degree level. I wish to take this course to enable me to develop scientific skills that will provide me with a greater understanding of the environment and factors that affect it.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

I am also studying Chemistry and Mathematics at A-level. The practical element of my chemistry course involves an understanding of procedures and precautions necessary throughout all science-based experiments; I feel that this understanding will improve my ability in practical elements of the course. After studying A-level mathematics, I feel being able to interpret numerical data at a high level will also enable me to develop my understanding of any numerical information that features in the course.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

I am keen on sports and outdoor pursuits. I have enjoyed a range of activities from countryside walks to kayaking and abseiling. Because of this I feel I would particularly enjoy the fieldwork the course offers. I have been able to combine this interest in sport with a part time job as a leisure attendant at local sport centres. As part of this post I was asked to lead a youth sports and activities group which aims to promote sport among young people in my area. This activity has also allowed me to introduce other young people to activities that I have enjoyed. This role has also helped me to develop skills that would help me while I am at university. The sports group involves arranging individual sessions as well as trips out.

This has improved my organisational skills, which has reflected my ability to combine part-time work with college effectively. Working as part of a team and serving members of the public has also improved my social skills, making me more confident when working with others.

I wish to study at university, not only for the knowledge that I will gain from the course, but also for the experience of university life has to offer. During my two years at college I have participated in various activities. For example, I represented the college at an open day, volunteered as a college council representative for my form group, participated in a blood donation scheme and was also involved in the shoebox appeal. These activities meant that I have to be confident, approachable and polite. I feel these are characteristics that will enable me to get involved with student life at university.

My ambition is to participate in conservation work abroad, before gaining experience in a career based in this area. I feel the experience outlined above and the knowledge I will gain from the course will enable me to achieve this ambition.

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

This statement waffles a lot at the beginning, and doesn't have enough of an academic focus, it barely mentions biology at all and to be honest doesn’t do nearly enough to sell the writer.

Your statement needs to be far closer to 3/4 academic and 1/4 Extra curricular - although you may be excited about the other things that university has to offer, an academic tutor is interested in what you have to offer academically.

The writer has also been inconsistent with her use of capitals (Maths and maths) and abbreviated unnecessarily (You should really use full subject names - i.e. mathematics). She has wasted space by stating things covered by the form "I am also studying Chemistry and Maths at A-level". She's started a new paragraph (the third one) which still directly references the previous one - there's no reason to start a new paragraph.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

The personal statement shows genuine enthusiasm for environmental biology and includes relevant examples connecting the applicant's interests with the course. However, it would benefit from a stronger academic focus, especially more specific references to biology-related skills and knowledge. The qualifications section should emphasize learning outcomes and how these directly prepare for university-level study. Extracurricular activities are well-presented and demonstrate transferable skills such as organisation, leadership, and social confidence, which are valuable for university life. To align with the 2026 UCAS format, consider consolidating overlapping paragraphs and using full subject names consistently for a polished, academic tone. Including more detailed examples of scientific curiosity or projects related to biology will enhance the statement's appeal to admissions tutors.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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