This is a real Biology personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
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University has always appealed to me because of the wealth of experiences it has to offer as a student. I enjoy a wide variety of subjects, but of these, I am most keen to continue studying Biology. For me, the main appeal of the course lies in the variety of topics that will be covered. The aspects of Biology I find particularly interesting are cellular Biology and how the immune system functions and responds.
I opted to study Biology, Geography, Physics, and ICT at A level. I received an A grade in Biology at GCSE and pursued the subject at AS and A2 levels, achieving a B in Biology at AS level. I am finding Biology interesting and challenging, which is what I wanted from my studies. My education has helped me build a strong foundation in the subject, preparing me well for university-level study in Biology.
I have had two work placements: at 'Young & Phillips Chartered Accountants' and 'Bridgend County Borough Council'. These experiences gave me insight into different working environments and helped me develop my interpersonal skills. Both employers remarked on my willingness to learn, enthusiasm, initiative, and ability to communicate clearly and work with others. Outside of school, I enjoy playing basketball, cricket, and pool, which give me balance and relaxation. I also enjoy using computers and am computer literate, having studied ICT at AS level and used various software during work placements. I understand university life will be challenging, but I am confident it will give me the best chance to achieve my potential and lead to a successful career. I believe university is the first step towards a promising career, and I hope this application indicates that I am a committed and promising candidate.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement demonstrates enthusiasm for Biology and some relevant academic preparation. However, it would benefit greatly from focusing more specifically on the applicant's passion for Biology, especially the cellular biology and immunology areas, including any independent reading or related experiences. The current balance favors academic and work experience details that are not strongly connected to Biology, which weakens the overall impact. To improve, the applicant should reduce references to unrelated subjects, workplaces, and hobbies, instead highlighting tangible skills and interests directly linked to the Biology course. Personal statements for 2026 should also avoid discussing living arrangements or independence unless directly relevant. Strengthening the biological content and connecting experiences to future academic goals will make the statement more compelling and aligned with new UCAS expectations.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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