Business and management degree personal statement example (1d) postgraduate

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

I am a Human Resource Co-ordinator with the long-term goal of practising as a Human Resource Manager. My career goals were shaped by my experience at British Airways during my break from university in the summer of 1990. At British Airways, I was part of the HR team that processed, reviewed and interviewed applications for pilot recruitment. These skills proved very useful to me when I accepted employment in the HR department at Metro Services while continuing my full-time university studies in America. At Metro, I played an integral role in shaping the internal business model and practices to accommodate expansion during a period of rapid growth of a multimillion-dollar firm, personally supervised 150 direct staff members, defined job duties and hired all staff. I consider this to be my most significant personal accomplishment. Moreover, my work experiences have led me to recognise the numerable opportunities arising from the favourable HR environment and thus have helped to shape my goals and aspirations. My professional experiences so far have been diverse yet relevant to my ambitions.

After 48 months teaching English at GEO Corporation overseas, I seriously confronted the thought of returning back home to Australia when I was invited to join and shape up a very new prestigious school in Tokyo that was encountering staff problems. I accepted the senior teaching position, which allowed me to pursue more responsibilities related to business operations. I progressed rapidly, providing advice on complex business problems, marketing, staff disputes, and customer satisfaction. Within one year, the school achieved a top five status among over 400 schools in Japan and was voted the friendliest school by the corporation. I was awarded the best teacher award for my contributions. These experiences strengthened my communication skills and adaptability, although my true interest remained in the HR field.

I want to pursue a postgraduate Human Resource Management programme because I believe it will provide me with the necessary theoretical knowledge and practical skills, including work placement training and the CIPD qualification, needed to advance my career. I desire a holistic view of business operations and management, areas I have little experience in but are crucial for becoming a successful HR Manager. This course will equip me with essential HR strategies, management development operations, and case studies that will strengthen my capabilities and prepare me thoroughly for senior roles in HR management.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Graduating from university with a Psychology degree, I developed excellent analytical skills and improved my problem-solving ability. These have been invaluable in my HR roles. Shortly after graduation, I joined GEO Corporation, where I taught English classes. Although I initially took the overseas position for only one year, I fell in love with the job, company, country, and language so much that I stayed another year.

During my current role as a Human Resource Co-ordinator, I evaluate issues related to development, recruitment, and training. This has given me a solid understanding of various quantitative tools used in valuation by HR managers. I have sharpened my quantitative skills and critical thinking abilities, alongside managing work efficiently despite demanding schedules.

While I have gained practical experience in HR coordination and management, I have not yet had the opportunity to take courses exploring core management topics such as Managing People, Personnel, and Learning Development. To realise my ultimate career goal, I need to strengthen my knowledge in these areas. I have used my work experiences to prepare for the academic rigors of postgraduate study, and I am eager to supplement my practical experience with strong theoretical foundations that a diploma programme offers.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Outside of formal education, my diverse career experiences have prepared me well for advanced study and future managerial roles. Working in dynamic environments like British Airways, Metro Services, and teaching roles abroad, I developed managerial, analytical, and communication skills. Supervising 150 staff and managing internal business transformations at Metro gave me hands-on leadership experience.

My teaching role in Tokyo expanded my ability to handle complex business problems, staff disputes, and customer satisfaction issues, enhancing my interpersonal and problem-solving capabilities. I learned the art of listening and explaining ideas effectively in a multicultural setting, which is critical in HR management.

Additionally, my current role involves evaluating HR practices and recruitment strategies which have furthered my understanding of HR processes. These professional experiences, combined with my determination and inquisitive nature, reinforce my readiness for postgraduate study.

Gaining the CIPD qualification through this postgraduate programme will accelerate my career progression and provide a comprehensive education in HR management practices. I am driven to acquire the skills necessary to manage complex HR challenges professionally and become an invaluable asset to any management team.

How personal statements have changed?

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