This is a real Classics personal statement written by a student for their university application to Royal Holloway, Exeter, Lampeter and Warwick. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
Studying Latin has strengthened my interest in Classics, not only because it has roots in English and the Romance languages but also it has direct relevance to Ancient Rome and Greece. I want to study it at university because it combines the chance to master Latin with my wider interest in ancient civilization.
The ancient world has subversively influenced western society in various forms from our philosophy to linguistics. I want to value its significance by studying it at degree level, especially through the study of the original languages so that classical texts retain the style which makes them worth reading and discussing in the first place.
I was intrigued by the Macedonian king's personality and his conquest across Greece and Asia Minor, and his life and conquests are a particular topic I want to study within a Classics degree.
As I did not have the opportunity to take Classical Civilization for A Level I have spent time reading classical works in translation to compensate. This includes some parts of Ovid's 'Metamorphoses'; after studying Book 8 for AS Level Latin, I was impressed by how the stories linked together without being necessarily told in order or great length. An example is the story of Hercules' birth told after his death in Book 9. Furthermore, I have been reading historical fiction based on the ancient world as a way of seeing different views on ancient characters or periods. For instance, Valerio Massimo Manfredi's trilogy on Alexander the Great was the first set of books I read that made me want to learn more about the ancient world.
I recently attended a five-day Classical Civilization and Ancient History Summer School in Repton. This showed me how broad the subject is and which parts of it suit me; for example, we discussed the works of different playwrights in my Greek Tragedy class. Having only read a few dramas by Sophocles beforehand, it was interesting to compare his style with that of other Greek dramatists. I thoroughly enjoyed the summer school and concluded that Classics is the subject I wanted to take to a higher level.
I believe Latin is a fascinating subject to study at any level and so I volunteer regularly at a Saturday Class run at my school. I help to teach Latin to young children, which has developed my teamwork skills and self-confidence. Moreover, this November I shall be participating on the Villiers Park course 'Classical Studies: New Approaches to Old Ideas' where I hope to learn more about the ancient world.
My school responsibilities include helping out as a School Librarian once a week, a job which has improved my problem solving and communication skills through dealing with people who want to take out or search for books. I am also a member of our school's Learning Support Team, which is set up to help students in younger year groups with their schoolwork, again involving teamwork with other members to organise the group.
Outside school my main interest is creative writing, and some of my work has been placed online for other people to look at. Having my work read and judged by people has given me more confidence in putting more thought and clarity into my writing both for pleasure and academically. Moreover my time practising Karate encouraged me to increase my attention to detail and self-esteem.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively covers all three key questions of the new UCAS format, providing clear motivations for studying Classics alongside specific academic preparations and extracurricular activities. The inclusion of personal reading, a summer school, and volunteer work strengthens the applicant's profile and shows genuine enthusiasm and initiative. To improve, the candidate could enhance the coherence by linking their experiences more explicitly to skills that will support university study, such as critical thinking and research. Adding more reflections on how certain experiences deepened their interest or prepared them for challenges in the course would also benefit the statement. Overall, the authentic and detailed personal voice is a strong asset in this statement for 2026 and beyond.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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