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Computer science with language processing degree personal statement example (1a) Masters

This is a real Computer science, computing and IT personal statement personal statement written by a student for their university application to University of Sheffield (MSc Computer Science with Speech and Language Processing). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

My main reasons for applying to the course is firstly to increase my knowledge, secondly because I find the subject matter interesting, and finally to help me achieve my ultimate career goals. I was introduced to linguistics through flatmates at York who were studying in the Language & Linguistics Science department. I found their course material very interesting, specifically the syntax, semantics and phonology modules. In my own Computer Science degree I found the modules that were related to the topics my flatmates were studying - Chomsky grammars in Theory of Computation and syntax in the compiler construction modules, particularly engaging and interesting, and these modules ranked among my favourite.

Whilst working in industry during my sandwich year, I made the realisation that I wanted to work in industry in a role that was not just software development, but one that allowed me more freedom including the opportunity to do research and work on the state of the art. I decided that gaining a Masters degree in a more specialist area would give me greater opportunity to do this, and a degree combining my knowledge in Computer Science gained as an undergraduate with the interest in linguistics I discovered would be the best option available to me.

Currently, my ultimate career plan is to work in industry in a research & development role. I feel that my chances of getting such a role, as opposed to a more usual software development role, would be greatly increased with a masters degree. I made the decision to study in a specialist area I find interesting and enjoy in order to make my ultimate work in industry more interesting and rewarding. I have not, however, ruled out the possibility of further academic research completely, although I believe it to be unlikely, and I await the experiences of a year ahead to fully shape my decisions.

I feel that the course structure and module choices at Edinburgh provides a good fit to what I desire to learn during a Masters degree, and the academic excellence of the University would also support my desire to use my postgraduate degree. When discussing postgraduate choices with my current academic supervisor, Edinburgh was the first University I was recommended to look in to.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

With my past experience with computing through my Computer Science degree at York, in addition to my interest and limited academic experience in linguistics through the natural language processing module I will be taking in May/June, I hope that I will be able to add myself to the course, as well as to the discipline in general through my dissertation.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Non-academically I've been involved in the JCR Committee of my college at York - Alcuin, in the form of IT Officer, and additionally I am currently Technical Director for the student newspaper and website Nouse. As part of this role I'm in charge of organising two teams - a technical one and web content one, as well as liaising with the other senior editors and directors and individual section editors and external bodies, as well as being ultimately responsible for the website and the infrastructure in the office.

Universities applied to:

  • University of Sheffield (MSc Computer Science with Speech and Language Processing)

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively communicates a clear motivation for pursuing a master's degree in a specialised interdisciplinary area combining computer science and linguistics. The applicant provides relevant examples linking their undergraduate studies with their career aspirations, which is a strong approach for 2026 personal statements. To improve, the statement could benefit from more specific details about skills or projects completed in the natural language processing module or Computer Science degree that directly prepare the applicant for this course. Additionally, expanding on why the University of Edinburgh is appealing beyond recommendations would strengthen the statement's personalisation. The applicant's leadership and organisational roles outside academia add valuable dimension and demonstrate transferable skills. Overall, the statement is coherent and reflective but could be optimised by integrating slightly more evidence of academic readiness and deeper reflections on fit with the course content and university culture.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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