This is a real Computer science, computing and IT personal statement personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
My main aspiration is to work within the sphere of a business economics and IT context. I am attracted to this industry because of its interesting area where I want to develop my personal knowledge.
Information Technology has provided me with an inspiration and realised that there is much to learn in a world where new technology is being developed. I consider studying and working in this division where I have recognised that I encounter many challenges and addressing problem solving scenarios will help me to improve my skills and abilities.
Studying AVCE ICT revealed to me how the world is changing so rapidly as technological innovations are being developed and enhanced so fast. This enticed me to discover more about artificial intelligence, which guided me to this path and explore things differently.
Studying AVCE ICT allowed me to enhance many of my personal skills and learn how to use new software, including creating a bespoke database system for a company. It allowed me to work for someone and meet his or her requirement. We studied artificial intelligence (AI), which made me consider how we know so little and there is so much to learn.
I have also been selected for the Cisco Networking Programme (CCNA). I was accepted after attending an interview. This course was only eligible to exceptional students, with outstanding attendance and punctuality also up to date with their college work. This course helps me to understand the functions of networks and basic operations within various network topologies.
I am also studying Microsoft Certified Professional MCP in evening classes. I was required to sit an exam for this course; this course teaches the basics of Microsoft operating systems and the problem that Microsoft users face day-to-day in modern business organisations.
Furthermore studying 'AS' Communication allowed me to develop further my language skills and gain confident amongst other people. I have also gained knowledge of how to use my time appropriately and work to a tight deadline. I learn how to develop my language skills and how to use appropriate verbal communication skills in situations.
Working in a family business allowed me to gain solid working experience and have developed skills, such as running a small business.
Working for Sainsburys allowed me to learn how to maintain customer satisfaction. Here I also picked up good communication skills, which help me to face any situation at any moment in time. Working in a large and varied environment as a team taught me to cope under pressure.
I enjoy sport, such as cricket and football. Being captain of my school cricket team allowed me to manage a team. My obsession for cricket has stayed with me since I was a kid. I play for West Essex cricket club.
Playing pool during my spare time allows me to concentrate and forget about college work. I am currently organising a small badminton club in college. This is where I have become skilled at managing and leading a small team. Training other people to stay fit at the same time increases my own personal abilities.
I enjoy travelling and have travelled extensively across countries in Europe such as Italy, France, Germany, and Switzerland.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement shows clear enthusiasm for IT and supporting business contexts, highlighting a good mix of academic qualification and practical workplace experience. The applicant effectively reflects on their learning journey, including exposure to emerging technologies like artificial intelligence and network management through Cisco and Microsoft certifications. To strengthen the personal statement for the new UCAS format, the candidate could enhance clarity and flow by improving grammar and sentence structure, as some phrasing is awkward or repetitive. Additionally, linking anecdotes more directly to skills and attributes that will benefit university studies would increase impact. Including explicit future goals related to the course would also improve focus under 'Why do you want to study this course?'. Overall, this statement has a solid foundation but would benefit from polishing language and deeper reflection on how experiences prepare them for university-level study.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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