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Economics and MMORSE degree personal statement example (1a) with review

This is a real Economics personal statement personal statement written by a student for their university application to Warwick (MMORSE). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

I have always had a love for subjects that demand logical, critical thinking. At school, Mathematics was the main academic outlet for this passion; however studying Economics A-Level has enabled me to see the world in a different light and has inspired me to increase my awareness of current world issues, through regularly reading the Economist and keeping up to date with current affairs. I see that Economics touches and changes the lives of everyone, and with a true understanding of Economics I will have the ability to achieve my goals.

From reading The Undercover Economist and A Free Lunch, which contextualised the world in simple terms of supply, demand, and competition, I find it interesting that many big issues in the world can be brought back to those simple theories. Yet what fascinates me more is that every theory or policy has two sides. I derive great satisfaction from spotting the weaknesses in economic policy, identifying, analysing and evaluating the secondary effects and unintended consequences.

Given the importance of mathematics, in particular statistics, in economics today, I believe my passion for mathematics will be highly beneficial. In particular my favourite area of pure maths, calculus, will be particularly useful in microeconomics, to derive individual budget constraint curves. As mathematics and statistics prove to be increasingly vital in business, finance and the economy, studying and understanding its applications within these areas would be very rewarding for me.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Currently, I am enjoying being involved in the Bank of England Times Target 2.0 challenge. In our team we are analysing and evaluating information from a number of sources, using different data sets to establish the extent to which the economy is running up against capacity constraints on the supply side. We are also keeping up to date with economic developments in the UK and world economy in order to assess what should be done to interest rates in April. This challenging work has developed my communication and data analysis skills.

Always having a natural ability for mathematics, I have strived to nurture it through taking AS Further Mathematics this year.

Throughout my academic career I have participated in school life fully, taking on several roles that developed my sense of responsibility and maturity such as peer mentor, school council representative, and Deputy Head Girl.

I feel that my past academic performance, work and other experiences outside school, as well as my personal qualities of determination, ambition, and commitment will help me to succeed at university.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

It is one of my main aspirations to speak a foreign language fluently and ultimately to live and work in France. When I participated in the French Exchange last year I was captivated by the culture and way of life. My knowledge of the French language improved vastly, and I gained confidence and developed people skills. I feel that full immersion in a language is the most beneficial way to learn about that language and culture, and I would like to expand my knowledge of French by taking studying/work abroad options.

Outside school I am taking part in the Duke of Edinburgh Award, and have nearly completed my Silver Award, which has taken dedication, perseverance and commitment as we have faced many struggles organising and completing it. I have been an assistant athletics coach for a group of under 11s which improved my confidence and patience. I developed entrepreneurial skills and an awareness of how economics links with business on the smallest scale from my venture on eBay, buying and selling stock, and from working with my mother to set up and run her payroll business.

I relish the opportunity and challenge of playing a full part in a thriving university department.

Universities applied to:

  • Warwick (MMORSE)

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

Overall, this is a strong personal statement in terms of content. There’s a lot of reading material and outside ventures from the applicant to bolster their statement and they have related their experiences to the course very well. In places, characters could be saved and there is potential to get a lot more out of what they have done so far. It’s also very important they get a unique and interesting opening sentence.

It's worth discussing more varied texts on economics and giving a personal opinion into what they have read. Space could be saved by spending less time on the applicant's desire to participate in a year abroad which does not require a whole paragraph.

A minor point is the use of capitalisation which is consistently wrong in the statement. They've constantly capitalised mathematics, economics etc when it isn't needed; it is a normal, common noun and has no more need for a capital letter than the word cat or dog. The only case where capital letters are needed for subjects in PSs is when the applicant is referring to A level Economics or BA History. If they are simply saying "I like maths" then it isn't needed, its no different to saying "I like cats".

The use of the word “always” is somewhat of a cliché in personal statements. Perhaps an explanation as to when the applicant first enjoyed these subjects, or an explanation why, would be more appropriate.

Applicants often write "A level X has enabled me to do X and now I feel X" without explanation; it's better to provide reasons why.

The Economist is a very commonly cited example of outside reading; it would be best to discuss a particular article critically.

The applicant could specify personal goals to demonstrate motivation.

The use of well-known economics books as examples is common; discussing less common texts or giving personal views rather than summaries would stand out more.

The applicant shows passion for evaluating economic theories and policies; expanding with specific examples would strengthen this.

Extracurriculars are well-chosen; however, character count could be saved by omitting certain phrases, and emphasizing personal contributions over group terms (e.g. "I" vs "we").

Statements about natural ability could be softened to avoid arrogance (e.g. "enthusiasm" rather than "natural ability").

The paragraph on language acquisition is somewhat long and could be shortened, and linked more directly to course relevance.

Extracurricular achievements are strong; expanding on entrepreneurial ventures earlier could improve impact.

The concluding sentence is good but could link more directly to the course subjects.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively showcases the applicant's enthusiasm for economics and mathematics, and emphasizes their active engagement with economics through both academic pursuits and extracurricular activities like the Bank of England challenge. The inclusion of specific examples such as calculus relevance and entrepreneurial experience adds depth.

To improve for the new UCAS personal statement format in 2026 and onward, the applicant should focus on providing clearer explanations and personal reflections, especially about how their studies and readings shaped their interests and goals. They should avoid clichés and general statements without supporting reasons. More concise wording will help to maximize character use.

I recommend strengthening the discussion on how their qualifications specifically prepare them for the course and emphasizing individual contributions to team activities. The section about language learning and year abroad could be shortened and better connected to the course ambitions. Lastly, a more distinctive opening sentence and a conclusion that ties back firmly to economics and mathematics would enhance the overall impact of the statement.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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