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Early childhood studies degree personal statement example (1a)

This is a real Education and teaching personal statement written by a student for their university application to Portsmouth (Early Childhood Studies). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Jesuit says ‘Give me the child until he is seven and I will give you the man’.

Of all the work experience I have done there is one particular experience that has stuck with me. While spending seven weeks at a local pre-school I met a young boy who didn't interact with anyone, none of the children or the staff. I was asked if I could spend some extra time with him. Over the course of the seven weeks, I managed to draw him away from the cars that he was so fond of playing with, and encouraged him to do his first drawing, which then led to his first painting. This was my biggest achievement and one that gave me immense satisfaction.

This experience made me question a child’s development; how do they draw? What do they draw? Can we tell anything about a child's life from their drawings? How do children perceive the world around them at various ages? Are there aspects of our modern world that affect young children’s development? Such questions fascinate me and the more I study them, and the more complex I realise a child's development is.

From reading the work of Victor Lowenfield and Betty Edwards my first question can start to be addressed. They believe that you can tell a child’s level of development by the way that they draw. The one stage that really caught my eye was at three years which is known as the ‘the pre-schematic stage’ they are beginning to form people. I think this has a lot to do with who they socialise with, as children are always surrounded by people and are rarely left on their own. They draw what they know and at this age all they really know is people. Young children are social beings; they develop physically, intellectually, emotionally and socially, increasingly in socialising and becoming less solipsistic.

In the future I aim to work with children with disabilities as this is where I am most interested; I look forward to studying a course that will provide me with the opportunity to do this and give me the opportunity to the progress to a really fulfilling career.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

I have enjoyed my range of A-level subjects. I currently study health and social care, which relates well to an early childhood studies course. It has allowed me to study a unit in early childhood development where I learnt about factors that affect a child’s development, as well as a topic about caring for the elderly. The Communication topic has allowed me to study the different ways that people communicate and how some people struggle with communicating effectively. I feel that this has given me a general idea of the care required for people of all ages.

As well as health and social care, I’ve studied psychology, where I have particularly liked the units on attachment and certain behaviours and where they come from. This has given me a good understanding of how important early childhood experiences are on our adult personalities and emotional and psychological wellbeing.

I feel that I am an organised person and although I like to have fun, I can be serious when it comes to completing work and meeting deadlines.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Universities applied to:

  • Portsmouth (Early Childhood Studies)

Grades achieved:

  • Unknown

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively conveys a genuine passion for early childhood studies, supported by reflective work experience and relevant academic subjects. The anecdote about the boy at the pre-school adds a strong personal touch that enhances authenticity. However, the statement could be improved by expanding the section on extracurricular or additional experiences beyond formal education to fully comply with the new UCAS format requirements. Including specific examples of volunteering, interests, or skills outside of study would demonstrate well-rounded preparation. Additionally, clearer linkage between subjects studied and career aspirations would strengthen the qualification relevance. Overall, the statement is engaging but could benefit from more balanced content across all three UCAS sections for the 2026 application cycle.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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