This is a real Engineering personal statement written by a student for their university application to Manchester University (Petroleum Engineering), Nottingham University (Chemical Engineering), Leeds University (Petroleum Engineering), Leeds University (Chemical Engineering) and Sheffield University (Chemical Engineering). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.
From an early age I have enjoyed partaking in the sciences at school. I furthered this by studying them at an advanced level. I would like to study Chemical Engineering specialising in Petroleum Engineering if possible. My interest in natural resources developed when I came across a detailed article in a newspaper about "Hubbert's Peak". I became fascinated with the production of oil and the manner in which drilling for such a widely available resource has become so difficult in recent years. It is truly an engineering marvel to see companies drilling 18000ft into the sea to obtain a natural resource, which in years gone by was readily available at 2000ft. I want to be part of a new age where engineers are constantly pushing the boundaries in an effort to be cleaner, more efficient and extract value of our world's depleting resources. Enrolling on my specified course is the natural step for me to develop my interest further and will lead me to my chosen career of working within the field of natural resources.
The study of physics and chemistry has enabled me to develop my interests further. For my A2 physics coursework I researched the area of fluid flow, which I immensely enjoyed. I am aware that fluid flow plays an important part in the extraction of oil and gas. This was an area, which was also touched upon during my 2 week work placement at a local engineering company. I was involved in a team on a number of projects lead by the head engineer. This gave me an insight in the wide ranging uses an Engineering degree can have in a different array of jobs.
With an elder sister who is currently in her final year of a Pharmacy degree I have had the benefit of browsing through literature such as RSC Chemistry World and New Scientist magazines. In doing so I have increased my knowledge in cutting edge scientific developments, such as the use of microbes to enhance oil recovery. These magazines also provide a general aid as to developments being made in a variety of science related fields.
Grades Achieved:
I believe that to succeed in life one must have a vast arsenal of skills and this is the reason why I have not limited myself to gaining experience purely in the science field. In the summer of 2007 I worked for a medium sized solicitors firm for approximately 6 weeks. I was able to experience the working life in an office environment. Meeting deadlines, working to a specific schedule, being flexible and learning how to work within new systems, were all basic tasks which prepare an individual for the time when one starts employment.
I have travelled extensively throughout Europe, the Middle East and Asia. I have found that travelling has broadened my horizons by giving me the opportunity to meet new people and experience different cultures. I am an enthusiastic boxer (partaking and watching) and also enjoy playing cricket and tennis. I thoroughly enjoy working with electronics and am in the process of building my very own CNC Machine.
I look forward to becoming a member of the numerous student organisations prevalent at your institution, whilst at the same time studying hard to achieve my academic goals. I relish the opportunity to prove my worth and I am firmly of the view that I can become a real asset to your institution not only academically, but also by becoming involved in the wide ranging activities on offer.
General Comments:
I didn't do too well in my grades so I had to go through clearing. If you have to too, do the following:
Write all information down such as clearing number, Ucas ID, Grades, universities you would consider, have it all to hand.
Grab as many family members, brothers, sisters, grandparents to ring on your behalf just make sure they have all the information required.
Ring all the universities you applied to see if they have any places left or will reconsider you.
When ringing the universities ring the university main switchboard instead of clearing hotline and ask to be transferred to the "Petroleum Engineering" department. The clearing advisors are usually students reading off a computer screen, you want to talk to admissions tutors and heads of departments, some universities give their numbers others don't. Even better ring both at the same time.
Don't give up; beg for a couple of seconds and if they keep on saying no move on.
Comments on the statement:
If your tutor says your statement is not good enough it is not good enough; make sure you act on their advice and change it.
When writing your personal statement I would not recommend telling lies. Just twist the truth and always cover your back. For example:
"You've been to Paris and Amsterdam." becomes "Travelled extensively throughout Europe."
"You worked at a fridge repair shop." becomes "I had experience at a local refrigeration engineering company."
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively communicates a genuine passion for petroleum engineering through clear examples and personal reflections. To strengthen the statement for the new UCAS format, it could benefit from more explicit linking of skills and experiences to specific aspects of the course and career ambitions. The educational achievements are well presented but could be expanded to explain how individual subjects prepare the candidate for challenges in petroleum engineering. The professional tone is appropriate, but a bit more narrative flow and cohesion between paragraphs would improve readability and engagement. Including more specific examples of problem-solving or teamwork during the work placement could also enhance the preparation section. The advice provided in the review section about clearing is practical and thoughtful, showing resilience and insight.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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