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English degree personal statement example (2e) with review

This is a real English personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

From an early age I have been interested in reading and in the English language. Through the GCSE and A-level literature courses, I have been able to refine this interest into an analytical approach. I am fascinated by the way literature has both influenced and been influenced by the history and culture of society. I particularly enjoy 20th century prose, for example the novels of E.M. Forster. My interest in drama has developed through a range of theatre visits, both in and out of school.

My career plans are still open at this stage, but I may choose to work in publishing or librarianship. I would enjoy the challenge of analysing and predicting the desires of readers, particularly in an age when IT and the Internet have changed many people's attitudes to books.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

My diverse range of A-level options have enabled me to adopt a mature and rational attitude to many issues and topics and discover links between my subjects. Studying German has been beneficial because it has provided insights into a different culture. Also, my exploration of a foreign language has allowed me to make discoveries about my own language. I chose physics as a contrasting subject to English and German because of the different demands placed upon me and the way it allows me to think in a logical and structured manner. This balanced approach to problems will be useful at university and in my future career.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

To gain experience of the publishing industry I have begun volunteer work in a charity bookshop. Again, my German skills are useful because they allow the possibility of international work.

I am equipping myself for future study and employment by accepting positions of responsibility both in and outside school.

Within school I am House Captain, giving me the opportunity to work with my peers, teachers and younger pupils. This position has developed my organisation and communication skills. I have also worked for the past year as a literacy prefect and 'reading friend'. This has meant assisting in the school's campaign to raise literacy standards and also helping younger pupils to improve their reading. As well as the satisfaction of seeing improved standards and the fun of sharing books with others, I have been able to gain teaching experience and a better understanding of language issues and problems.

Outside of school, I have a long-standing commitment to voluntary work. For several years I have held the position of Young Leader with a local Brownie pack. I am now able to lead groups and to form ideas quickly. These leadership skills will be useful in the future, as I will be able to work as part of a team and also make valuable contributions within this group environment.

I am looking forward to the opportunities available to me at university and would like to become involved with community groups and student journalism.

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

General Comments:

This is a shorter personal statement than would normally be expected and the applicant hasn't taken the opportunity to expand on their interest in their chosen degree course. Only one writer and not a single text is mentioned. They haven't explained what they like about Forster's work and show little evidence of critical engagement and wider reading. There is too much information about volunteer work and other A Level subjects in comparison. The personal statement needs to be more academically focused. The applicant also needs to remember to include full stops at the end of paragraphs.

Comments on the statement:

From an early age I have been interested in reading and in the English language. This is a rather clichéd opening line; universities will be more interested in whether you are academically engaged now. Through the GCSE and A-level literature courses, I have been able to refine this interest into an analytical approach. Examples? I am fascinated by the way literature has both influenced and been influenced by the history and culture of society. Expand on this. I particularly enjoy 20th century prose, for example the novels of E.M. Forster. My interest in drama has developed through a range of theatre visits, both in and out of school. Again, this is underdeveloped. Talk about a theatre visit and the way in which it inspired you to take an interest in drama.

My diverse range of A-level options have enabled me to adopt a mature and rational attitude to many issues and topics and discover links between my subjects. Studying German has been beneficial because it has provided insights into a different culture. Also, my exploration of a foreign language has allowed me to make discoveries about my own language. Such as? I chose physics as a contrasting subject to English and German because of the different demands placed upon me and the way it allows me to think in a logical and structured manner. This balanced approach to problems will be useful at university and in my future career. You have moved onto describing your other subjects without talking about a single piece of literature which interests you. More detail about your chosen subject is needed. There is also an absence of full stops at the end of your paragraphs.

My career plans are still open at this stage, but I may choose to work in publishing or librarianship. I would enjoy the challenge of analysing and predicting the desires of readers This doesn't flow particularly well. Be natural when you write, particularly in an age when IT and the Internet have changed many people's attitudes to books. To gain experience of the publishing industry I have begun volunteer work in a charity bookshop. Again, my German skills are useful because they allow the possibility of international work.

It's good that you have a lot to write about in terms of your other subjects and volunteer work but most of this personal statement is not directly related to your chosen subject and universities could quickly lose interest.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement shows genuine enthusiasm for English literature and related fields but would greatly benefit from deeper academic engagement and more detailed examples of texts or writers studied. The applicant should aim to expand on why they find certain literature appealing, such as specific themes or techniques in Forster's work, to demonstrate critical thinking and passion for the course. Including more coherent discussion about literature rather than focusing heavily on other subjects or extracurricular activities will improve the statement's relevance. Clarifying career goals naturally within the narrative would enhance flow. Attention to punctuation and fuller explanations would strengthen professionalism. Overall, focusing more strictly on the chosen subject while integrating personal experiences that support university readiness could make this a stronger, more compelling new UCAS personal statement.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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