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English degree personal statement example (2h) with review

This is a real English personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Ever since I was a child I have had a passion for reading and writing and I believe that English is the ideal course for me to study at university. In school, English has consistently been my strongest subject and one that I find the most challenging, yet rewarding. My reading tastes are eclectic and I admire many writers, from those typically studied academically, such as Shakespeare, to contemporary novelists like Zadie Smith.

I have always been interested in important moral debates, and I am aware that our great writers have often combined entertainment for their contemporary readers whilst addressing issues whose significance is as relevant today as when it was written. The study of literature has also enabled me to understand something of the cultural and historical contexts in which texts were written.

My love of writing leads me to favour journalism as a potential career, as I am fascinated by current affairs. Whilst this profession is often regarded as difficult to enter, I believe that my determination and confidence will help me to succeed.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Studying English has not only given me the opportunity to appreciate works of literature, but has also allowed me to develop skills that will be of considerable benefit to me in the future. I have learnt to extract meaning through the detailed analysis of texts and to articulate my interpretation.

Throughout my time studying English I have developed qualities that I am proud of - confidence in expressing my opinions, the ability to prompt and engage in group discussion and a willingness to explore different ideas and approaches to literature.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

My involvement in writing for Reality (the youth section of my local newspaper, the Jersey Evening Post) together with an article for the JCG Old Girls Magazine has given me first-hand experience in writing for an audience. This has reinforced my desire to study English at university.

I enjoy a variety of pursuits, including drawing, walking, cycling and yoga. I am keen on drama, having acted in school productions, and this is a hobby that I would like to continue at university.

At present, I am doing voluntary community service, working in a coffee shop at the General Hospital, which I find worthwhile and rewarding. I am hoping to count this towards my Duke of Edinburgh Silver award. In school, I am a prefect and deputy house captain, positions that have benefited me in terms of both my organisational and time-keeping skills and have allowed me to become deeply involved with my school in its various activities and fundraising events.

I enjoy debating and have been involved both in and out of school. I contributed to the Jersey Youth Assembly in 2002, an event that mirrored a real parliamentary sitting of the States of Jersey but consisted of students from the island's sixth forms. I acted as 'seconder' for a highly controversial motion, writing both my own speech and that of the 'proposer'.

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

This statement provides a solid base but would benefit greatly from increased specificity and stronger relevance to studying English. The statement only mentions two authors and lacks detail on why these writers are admired, which may reflect poorly to admissions tutors who expect evidence of broad, enthusiastic reading. The extra-curricular section is lengthy and includes activities not clearly linked to English. Reducing this section to focus on activities most relevant to English, such as drama and writing, would allow more space to discuss literary interests, thereby strengthening the statement.

The repeated claims about interest and skills are often too generic or clichéd without concrete examples. For instance, explaining what is specifically admired about Shakespeare and Zadie Smith or analysing a particular text would better demonstrate engagement and analytical ability. Reviewer also notes informal tone and overused phrases such as "passion" and unnecessary mentions of GCSE results which admissions tutors can already see. The statement would be improved by cutting irrelevant details like volunteer pay status and concluding on an English subject-related note rather than general extracurriculars.

The reviewer suggests reordering content – moving writing experience to the extra-curricular section and developing commentary on the moral and cultural significance of literature with examples. Adding examples from debating to highlight skills relevant to English would make that section more pertinent.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement shows a genuine enthusiasm for English and highlights a range of relevant academic skills and extra-curricular activities. However, it could be significantly improved by incorporating more specific literary examples and deeper engagement with texts. Explaining what the applicant admires about certain authors and demonstrating analytical skills through discussion of particular works will better showcase passion and readiness for degree-level study.

The extra-curricular section should focus on activities strongly connected to English, such as drama and writing for publications, while more peripheral hobbies can be minimized. This will make the statement more coherent and relevant. The statement would also benefit from a stronger, more focused conclusion that reiterates commitment to English and links previous experiences directly to skills needed for the course. Avoiding clichés and generalities will improve professionalism and impact.

Overall, restructuring the statement in line with the new UCAS format with clear, detailed responses to each prompt will help present a compelling and authentic application.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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