This is a real English personal statement written by a student for their university application to Bristol University, University College London, Kings College London and Sussex University. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
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Literature unites everything that I find exhilarating about life, and most of my spare time is taken up with reading. To me, literature and the written word is mankind's greatest achievement, which is why I am determined to dedicate my life to its study. I am not content with simply reading a text, as I have a hunger to learn everything I can about what I read: how it was written; why it was written; what it means; its place in literature as a whole.
I read a catholic range of literature. I particularly enjoy Romantic poetry, as I find it to be an intriguing example of how literature can be used to make a stand against society's established codes, as poets rebelled against previous literary traditions and, contrary to the doctrines of neo-classical literature, focused on emotions and on the individual. Another example of such a rebellion, and another area of fascination to me, is the dystopian novel of the twentieth century. My favourite examples include Orwell's '1984' and 'Animal Farm', Golding's 'Lord of the Flies', Bradbury's 'Fahrenheit 451' and Huxley's 'Brave New World'. Many of these great works were inspired by, and reacted against, the rise of political extremists during the first half of the century. These works are also often highly satirical, a style which I admire and which has lead me to read works such as Pope's 'The Rape of the Lock', Heller's 'Catch-22' and Ben Elton's cynically satirical plays. I also appreciate the novels of Jane Austen, especially the witty Gothic satire 'Northanger Abbey'.
I see literature as both a cause and an effect of history, and so I study history in order to fully appreciate the context of a piece of writing. I find it fascinating how one's knowledge of a historical period can alter one's interpretation of a text. Also, I believe that the study of art can contribute to one's understanding of literary background, for example in the way that Blake's paintings can give an insight into his mind, and thus his poetry. I find that my study of maths is useful as it contributes to my logical and analytical skills, which are vital for the critical appraisal of literature.
At the end of year 12 I attended a ten-day residential course at Eton College to study English literature. The course was designed to be of the same intensity, and of a similar level, to university studies. These were ten of the best days of my life, and made me realise that an English course at university would be perfect for me, and that I would be perfect for it. This course also allowed me to refine my interests in the subject, and to look in detail at areas hitherto untouched-upon in my state school education.
I have completed a work experience placement at a local architects' office, which I feel taught me many life-skills. Seeing the enthusiasm of the people I worked with showed me that it is important to pursue a career in a subject you love. Therefore, although I do not have a definite idea of where I wish to work in the future, I would like to find employment in an area directly related to English, such as in publishing or journalism.
I take part in extra-curricular activities that I feel aid me in my English studies. Being a member of a debating society has increased my discussion abilities, and has taught me how to argue my point while retaining an open mind and being aware of the opinions and interpretations of others. I am a volunteer for a group that helps less-able children to read, as I feel that the ability to appreciate the written word is the most fundamental life-skill that a child can have. I love making music on the guitar and the piano, and I am an avid art-fan. I am part of NAGTY, Young Enterprise and the Duke of Edinburgh award scheme.
The applicant has established the premise that they are committed to the subject, which is perhaps the most important thing to build into a personal statement. The best way of doing this is to define lucid and original examples of how this 'passion for reading', 'hunger for English', etc. manifests itself in your every day life; so out with the hackneyed clichés, and in with real cases. Show your commitment.
A tutor will know that the texts listed in this statement aren't actually that far from the applicant's A-Level syllabus, which is disconcerting to say the least. If you're interested in a subject of literature, you need to ensure you read cogent examples in order to qualify your interest; otherwise it can be seen as a means of name-dropping more than anything else.
Extra-curricular activities are relatively unimportant; tutors would like a nice well-balanced candidate as their student, but they're more interested in those who attain good academic grades and have a passion for the subject. One needs to keep that in mind, so as not to indulge in a resume of irrelevant boasts.
Comments on the Statement:
"Literature unites everything that I find exhilarating about life," such as? The applicant needs to be specific. Also, "most of my spare time is taken up with reading" uses awkward syntax; be natural. "I have a hunger to learn everything I can about what I read" is clichéd; a colon would be more appropriate than semicolons here.
The range of literature is described as catholic, which is a broad claim. Romantic poetry is mentioned, but who are your favourite poets? The statement that Romantic poets rebelled against previous traditions is questioned, as is the idea that literature before the Romantics did not focus on emotions or the individual.
The dystopian novels listed are basic and somewhat shallow in terms of reading; consider exploring lesser-known works or deeper analysis.
The link between literature and history could be clearer and more coherent. Also, the use of different personal pronouns ('I' and 'one') should be consistent.
The mention of art and the logical skills gained from maths could be expanded and emphasized more effectively.
The description of the Eton residential course includes clichés and some awkward phrasing; consider rewording for professionalism.
Overall, the personal statement shows genuine enthusiasm but would benefit from more specific examples, attention to language clarity, and a stronger focus on academic preparation.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively communicates a genuine passion for English literature, showing broad literary interests and linking subject knowledge with other academic disciplines such as history, art, and maths. The applicant provides meaningful anecdotes, such as the Eton residential course, which adds depth to their motivation.
To improve, the statement should avoid clichés and awkward syntax, and should focus more on specific literary works, authors, or concepts rather than general or commonly cited texts. Greater clarity and coherence in the discussion of how other subjects support literary studies would strengthen the narrative. The applicant should also ensure consistent pronoun usage and avoid informal or overly casual phrasing.
Enhancing the statement by clearly connecting experiences and skills to the course aims will make it more compelling under the new Ucas personal statement format (2026 onwards), which places emphasis on focused, relevant content conveying both academic preparedness and broader experiences.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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