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I am deeply interested in studing for an English literature and journalism joint honours degree. My interest stems from my love of literature; everything from the 19th Century poet Robert Browning to contemporary novelists Stephen King and Richard Laymon. The journalism aspect also holds great interest to me- I have found I really enjoy journalism through working for the local Gazette newspaper. Both aspects of the degree will allow me to make progress in my chosen career.
At university, I am very much looking forward to not only broadening my existing knowledge of literature, but to delving into texts new to me. I am also looking forward to learning the new and compelling subject of journalism, and I hope to participate in the journalistic opportunities offered by the university.
I have received numerous awards for English throughout my school life, and I am competent at analysing, comparing and contrasting texts from a variety of periods. My studies in Religion classes have vastly improved my ability to conduct in-depth research into a variety of philosophical and ethical topics. In addition, I achieved 99.3% in my AS level Religion exam.
I have also been employed as a district columnist for a local newspaper reporting public interest news and writing reviews of shows and events.
During my time at school, I have participated in shows and the choir, and I have sung at talent evenings and coffee mornings. I have also achieved my prefect badge and compact certificate for good attendance, and being actively involved in the life of the school, namely taking part in a paired reading scheme to improve the confidence and reading levels of younger pupils, representing the school at open evenings and numerous trips such as theatre and music, and performing duties to better the life of the school. Lastly, I was appointed operations manager in my Young Enterprise company, which I thoughroughly enjoyed.
Outside of school, I enjoy attending concerts regularly and playing guitar. I have played at large local venues in my band and been offered the chance to record a demo CD. I have held a part-time position in a local craft shop for a year which has improved my communication skills and knowledge of the working world greatly. I also like to draw and paint, I am extremely computer literate and I regularly read books from a variety of genres.
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The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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