This is a real Geography personal statement written by a student for their university application to University of Birmingham, University of Nottingham, Bangor University, Aberystwyth University and Lancaster University. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
The primary reason why I want to study geography at university is that it addresses the main issues in the world today such as overpopulation, the depletion of the ozone layer and pollution. Geography is the subject that has interested me the most all through GCSE and A-Level and the only subject that I have ever considered studying at a higher level. Geography interests me particularly in how it links people to the earth that surrounds them. To give two examples of this: people have an impact on the earth through means such as pollution; and the earth impacts on people's lives through natural disasters like volcanoes.
I enjoyed all the topics explored in the AS level geography course. However it was the population topic from human geography that interested me the most. By studying population predictions from different countries in the form of population pyramids and the demographic transition model, I was able to understand how population was going to change in different parts of the world and how this would affect the area they live in.
I am looking forward to building on my existing knowledge of geography and getting the opportunity to study it for 3 more years. I hope then to achieve my goal to teach geography to share my own enthusiasm of the subject.
Studying geography at A-Level has strengthened my desire to study the subject at university by introducing me to new topics which I have enjoyed such as cold environments and health. My knowledge of previous topics I have studied, such as rivers and population, has also been strengthened. My geographical skills have also improved throughout the course especially through fieldwork investigation. Fieldwork has also taught me how geography works in a real life setting. I undertook two fieldwork investigations in my AS year: one physical and one human. The human fieldwork investigation took place in Wolverhampton and compared the population structures of two wards through the use of surveys and secondary data such as census statistics. The physical fieldwork investigation tested the changes downstream of the Ashes Hollow river in Shropshire. This fieldwork investigation taught me skills such as data collection; for example when testing the velocity of the river I was taught correctly how to use a flow metre and how to get the most accurate result. By also studying Psychology and English Literature and Language combined at A-Level, I have been able to develop other skills such as essay writing and statistic techniques.
In my free time, I work in a charity shop at least once a week. This has been a rewarding experience and has taught me essential skills such as taking the initiative in a situation. An example is when inspecting the shop floor if I saw a half empty shelf I would know to fill it up. I have also attended geographical lectures with the Shropshire branch of the Geographical Association. This has reinforced my enthusiasm to study geography at higher level. One of my main hobbies is swimming, a skill I only learnt 4 years ago by teaching myself after many years of struggling. I now try to swim at least 3 times a week. Swimming has given me confidence to try other new sports including badminton. While at school I was a student leader, a role that enabled me to work in a group to help organise students break and lunch times to stop overcrowding in corridors. This involved scheduling where different year groups would be and the amount of people who were allowed in different areas. In 2008, I acquired a Mandarin Chinese breakthrough certificate after a year long course. I enjoyed learning a new language as well as other elements of the course such as learning what China was really like from the Chinese teacher.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement successfully communicates genuine enthusiasm for geography and is well-structured according to the new UCAS format. The applicant effectively links their interest in pressing global issues with their academic studies and practical experiences. The detailed description of fieldwork and how studying other subjects developed transferable skills is a strong point. To further improve, the applicant could deepen the reflection on how these experiences have shaped their skills and readiness for university study, particularly with examples of challenges faced and lessons learned. Additionally, clarifying future aspirations, such as the teaching goal, with more detail on motivation would strengthen the conclusion. Overall, it is a solid and convincing personal statement for the new UCAS personal statement requirements.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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