This is a real Geography personal statement written by a student for their university application to University of Durham (Earth Sciences), University of Leicester (Physical Geography), University of Southampton (Geography), University of Portsmouth (Environmental Science) and University of East Anglia (Environmental Sciences). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
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I turned to her and asked "Why do you love your job so much?" Her reply was simple, yet powerful, "I am able to help something which is defenceless". This exchange of words took place while flying to Colorado, speaking to a woman whose job it was to work alongside oil companies to research their environmental impact on the physical landscape around them. As the conversation continued over the duration of the flight, I became inspired by the projects she had worked upon and started to realise that a subject I had enjoyed taking at school could progress into further education, and on to higher education.
My love for the environment has stemmed from my appreciation for the natural power that it holds, and how something we have taken for granted, such as water, can cause a catastrophe like the 2004 Indian Ocean Tsunami. This, coupled with an inspiring Geography teacher in secondary school has led me to explore these topics further through education and personal interest. The media often only expresses the social and medical impacts that natural disasters have on our society, such as the recent earthquakes in Haiti and the outbreak of Cholera. They focus less on the physical impacts these events can have to our environment, for instance Mount Pinatubo's eruption in 1991 having an effect on the global climate.
I am particularly captivated by volcanoes and the processes of an eruption. My interest in this area increased after studying the 1980 Mount St. Helens eruption and looking at the events surrounding and during the eruption, such as the pyroclastic flow. Understanding why these events happen has intrigued me.
My enthusiasm for skiing has allowed me to travel to different environments, such as the Rocky Mountains and Glaciers in Europe, and see the earth's formation in a visual perspective which can only be described as awe-inspiring. I have also travelled to Belize, and experienced the incredible 'Great Blue Hole' located near the Lighthouse Reef. My experiences with different environments has given me an unconditional respect for the power of our earth.
I am currently attending an Access to Higher Education; Social Sciences course, on which I study Environmental Studies, Biology, Sociology and Psychology. This course has not only provided me with the educational requirements I need to progress into higher education, but has allowed me to develop my personal skills in organisation, independent study, essay and report writing, ICT skills and the ability to embrace new concepts.
Alongside my studies, I have committed my time to reading various environmental research journals and articles, and watch documentaries, including Planet Earth and Blue Planet. Making myself aware of environmental issues and the development of the earth has assisted me in understanding in more depth the subjects that I study.
The opportunity to study at University will allow me to understand the environment in a more advanced manner and develop my understanding in a topic that I am fascinated by. This will empower me to focus my academic studies into an area which I love in more depth and which will give me the technical skills and knowledge I require to progress further in this subject than I would without University education.
As the environment and the impacts we have on it is becoming an increasing worry for our society, studying in this subject area at university will put me into a position to be able to help understand, research and combat these issues.
Being able to study the earth's environment will not only fulfil a desire I have to further understand the natural processes, but allow me to be a part of a movement that will inspire a younger generation, like I was inspired, to be educated on the environment and proceed to carry on the work of the many scientists, researchers and other personnel to understand our planet and create a more sustainable and resourceful way of living.
I am a mature student (21) and decided to go back to education to gain a university standard education. Due to the courses around me, I was forced to take a Social Sciences Access to HE course rather than a pure Sciences course, which obviously was less than optimal for a pure science based subject.
I did not receive an offer to Durham, which was to be expected and withdrew my application from Southampton due to not being impressed when the course on my interview day. I received offers from UEA, Portsmouth and Leicester, but decided overall to go with Portsmouth due to the content of the course and the possibility of continuing to do a masters at the university which is extremely interesting to me (Masters in Geological and Environmental Hazards).
Comments from both UEA and Southampton on my interview day regarded my personal statement as 'Excellent' and commenting on the introduction into the personal statement as eye-catching. I attempted to put as much of my interests to do with the subject in my personal statement, including some personal experiences. I also wanted to express the passion I have for the Physical side of the subject, rather than the human side.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively conveys a genuine passion for environmental science with vivid personal anecdotes and clear motivation. The introductory anecdote is engaging and a strong hook for admissions tutors. Including diverse experiences such as travel and documentary watching enhances the applicant's enthusiasm and contextual understanding.
To improve for the 2026 new UCAS personal statement format, consider explicitly linking each qualification or experience more directly to the skills or knowledge applicable to the course. Providing more specific examples of skills gained from studies (for example, particular research, data analysis, or fieldwork) would strengthen the academic preparation section.
Additionally, ensuring the statement clearly outlines applicants' future aspirations and how the university course fits into these goals would bolster the final section. Clarifying why the chosen university and course are the best fit beyond course content (e.g., specific modules, facilities, or faculty) would help differentiate this application.
Overall, the statement is well-written and authentic, with a strong personal voice that aligns well with the new UCAS personal statement structure and expectations.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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