This is a real Geography personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
I believe that quantity surveying is a vocation and not just a job. My interests in this area have established within in the last year. Some of my ancestors are quantity surveyors and I have seen how demanding the profession can be.
Unfortunately I have not had the opportunity to shadow a Quantity Surveyor outside my family however I would like to gain experience in the one year work placement that is offered through this course.
A quantity Surveyor is a high pressured job and I feel I have the motivation and skills to deal with this pressure and work to the best of my ability and I am sure this is the career for me.
I am able to communicate and participate well in a team, as well as being able to achieve goals and objectives independently through hard work and dedication.
I have attended school for fourteen years and within in this time I have gained a lot of experiences and many rewards. I have obtained many certificates and recognition for school choir of the year, camogie championships, netball tournaments, ladies Gaelic football and swimming. Academic awards include recognition for French speaking, level 7 in information Systems skills, First aid courses completed with St. John's ambulance service finally I received a plaque for gaining 8 G.C.S.Es grade C and above.
I am currently playing for the ************ Ladies Gaelic football team. This has taught me how to work together as a team, consider others yet having self motivation as included in a team sport; this has given me experience in how to work with others especially under pressure.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively communicates a genuine interest in quantity surveying, reinforced by family connections and a realistic understanding of the profession’s demands. The applicant highlights relevant teamwork skills and personal motivation, which are valuable for this career path. To improve, the statement could benefit from more specific examples related directly to quantity surveying tasks or challenges, and clearer articulation of how academic studies link to the course. Adding any relevant work experience or plans to gain it, beyond the mentioned placement, would strengthen the preparation narrative. The personal achievements, especially extracurricular, demonstrate transferable skills well but could be more explicitly connected to the course requirements.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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