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Personal Statement:Speech and language therapy 1 - The Student Room

This is a real Healthcare personal statement written by a student for their university application to UEA, Reading, Sheffield, Manchester and Leeds. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

I first became interested in Speech and Language Therapy as a career opportunity through my mother’s franchise of Tumble Tots in West Sussex, where many parents in the area were having trouble finding a speech therapist for their child. Having spent my whole life surrounded by younger children I know communication is a vital skill. I therefore felt that for these children and their families not to have access to an important service was wrong. I want to be able to help people who have difficulty with basic communication skills. I’ve gained valuable experience by attending talks by speech and language therapists and psychologists about the importance of Speech Therapy, what a career in Speech and Language Therapy is like and the mental health spectrum. I have also read relevant articles and watched videos by I CAN. These resources offered me the opportunity to fully understand what a career in Speech Therapy would be like and have increased my determination to achieve it.

When I first considered Speech and Language Therapy I was sure I would want to work with children; however, my work at Care Co-ops and Grace Eyre have shown me the importance of speech in adulthood and now feel that I could work in either field. My time at the Evelina Children’s Hospital showed me how important Speech Therapy is and I know that it is the only career path I want to take.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

My A level choices give me a good understanding of different aspects of Speech and Language Therapy. In Human Biology I’m learning about the structure of the body and what can go wrong to cause speech or swallowing difficulties. Psychology lets me explore cognitive development further than I did in GCSE Child Development. I did a long term study of the normal development of a child, looking at their physical, cognitive, emotional and social development and I achieved 102/105 marks for my study. Performing Arts is a subject that requires me to put in a lot of work and challenges me to be creative and outgoing. When working with children in Speech Therapy my experience from this subject will help lots.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Since the beginning of July 2008 I have been volunteering at the Grace Eyre Foundation, Brighton, a day centre for adults with learning difficulties. I also take part in their ‘Travel Buddy Scheme’ assisting a disabled lady to use public transport to get home so that she can have increased independence. Volunteering at Grace Eyre has shown me how Speech Therapy can improve someone’s life greatly by giving them the opportunity to express themselves. At Grace Eyre I have been taking basic Makaton lessons which I have found a fantastic tool when trying to communicate with some of the people there.

In July 2008 I volunteered for a week at the Care Co-ops Community Farm, East Sussex, which is maintained by adults with disabilities, both mental and physical. Whilst there I experienced how rewarding it is to help people with disabilities through having fun and being creative and this deepened my resolve to become a speech therapist. I have also worked with both able and disabled children; in June 2006 I did a week’s work experience at Cumann Iosaef Community Pre-school, it allowed me to see the interaction between able and disabled children. I also helped to run a weekly sports club at Davigdor Infants School for 4 months in 2006 as part of my sports leaders qualification.

On the 1st and 2nd of October 2008 I shadowed Speech Therapist Yamini Burgul at the Evelina Children’s Hospital which was fascinating, I got so much out of my two days there and although some of the cases I saw were tragic the difference that Yamini was making to the children’s lives was so apparent that it strengthened my resolve go into this career. I have also organised to shadow Speech Therapist Alison Eccles at Chailey Secondary School in January 2009.

Universities applied to:

  • UEA
  • Reading
  • Sheffield
  • Manchester
  • Leeds

Grades achieved:

  • 320 points
  • 300 points

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

General Comments: This is a good basis for a personal statement but it needs a lot of improvement. The applicant clearly has a lot of relevant experience; however it needs to be related more specifically and overtly to their interest in Speech and Language Therapy. If necessary, not all of it needs mentioning: quality over quantity. This would mean that the applicant could reflect on their experience far more, talking about what they learned about the client base and the job of a Speech and Language Therapist. The applicant should also talk about any personal qualities or skills that they possess which should be desirable in a Speech and Language Therapy student. It is also important to note that the applicant doesn’t really show awareness for the fact that disability and speech and language problems are not always connected. The applicant also needs to be careful of overcapitalising, and thinking of where parts could be written more concisely or removed.

Comments on the statement:

  • The opening about the mother’s franchise doesn’t explain why Speech and Language Therapy is interesting. It’s also not important to mention where the mother works.
  • The applicant needs to show awareness that not all communication is verbal, for example Makaton.
  • The phrase "I therefore felt... was wrong" needs expanding on: why did this trigger the applicant's interest? Feeling it is wrong doesn’t necessarily mean wanting to study it.
  • Why does the applicant want to help people with communication difficulties? This should be explored more.
  • Contractions should not be used in a formal document.
  • The talks attended need expanding on to show how they motivated the applicant.
  • Mentioning the mental health spectrum is misleading as not all needing speech therapy have mental health issues.
  • The resources by I CAN should be incorporated more meaningfully.
  • The volunteering section is too packed and needs reflection on how the experience relates to Speech and Language Therapy.
  • Locations and specific dates are largely irrelevant.
  • The applicant should relate activities to skills needed in Speech and Language Therapy rather than just listing.
  • The applicant should avoid naming individuals shadowed.
  • Academic references should stress interests and insights rather than marks.
  • The applicant should avoid stating initial narrow interests (i.e., only children) and instead express openness to working with various populations.
  • The statement would benefit from more specific reflection about why the career appeals and what challenges are expected.
  • Overall, the statement would improve by focusing on quality experiences, personal qualities, and explicit linkages to Speech and Language Therapy.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement provides a solid foundation showcasing genuine enthusiasm and a range of relevant experiences related to Speech and Language Therapy. The candidate demonstrates commitment through volunteering and shadowing, which is excellent for 2026 admissions. However, the statement would benefit greatly from deeper reflection and clearer connections between the experiences and the skills required to succeed in the course and career. Including more about personal qualities such as empathy, communication skills, and adaptability would strengthen the narrative. Avoid listing activities without explanation; instead, focus on what was learned and how this prepares the applicant for the challenges of the course. Streamlining the content to remove less relevant details (e.g., specific dates, locations, individuals’ names) would improve readability and impact. Finally, enhance articulation of motivation for the course beyond initial interest, emphasizing long-term commitment and understanding of the profession for a new UCAS personal statement.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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