This is a real History personal statement written by a student for their university application to University of Oxford, University of York, Durham University, University of St Andrews and University of Edinburgh. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.
I have always had a keen interest in history, and from my studies throughout my time at school, I have realised that it is more than just the study of the past for its own sake. It is about defining the way that the past impacts on our present and future, and the effects that decisions made centuries ago have on the way contemporary society operates. From recent reading including Carr's What is History? and Re-thinking History by Keith Jenkins, I have been able to explore in more detail the professional debates as to, for example, whether history goes in cycles, as well as to encounter new concepts, such as the idea that history might be a science, or the limitations of viewing history solely as the actions of successive individuals.
Through the further study of history, I would embrace the chance to study the subject that I am truly enthusiastic about alongside like minded individuals, whilst also gaining skills which will be transferable to the career I choose to pursue after university.
Currently, I am in the process of researching an Independent Investigation on 'The Mid Tudor-Crisis', an idea stemming from an essay on the Reformation which I researched and wrote during a week spent at a UNIQ Summer School. There, I investigated periods and themes previously a blank canvas for me such as "Black Power in the USA". Through tutorial style discussions on the idea of 'modernity in Russia', I encountered for the first time ideas regarding the theory of history and how the individual's view of what is 'modern' and 'civilised' is influenced by their outlook and position in time. In addition to reading books such as Jones' The Mid-Tudor Crisis 1539-63 which focus directly on my investigation topic, to gain a further sense of the Tudor period as a whole, I have read The Sisters that Would be Queen by L. Der Leise, which focuses on the lives of the Grey sisters, and Tudor Women by A. Plowden, thus extending my knowledge of a period which falls outside the limited 19th and 20th century history which I am studying as part of my A Level course.
The reading which I will carry out within my other A2 subjects complements my interest in history. English Literature will allow me to study texts from the pastoral genre, such as Hardy's Tess of the D'Urbervilles, which present views of society in the 19th century, as well as perspectives on women and changes from rural to industrial life. By also examining literature from Marxist and Feminist viewpoints I seek to familiarise myself with concepts which will overlap with my studies within history. In French, I will explore the unrest in May 1968 and I am keen to continue to improve my linguistic skills to possibly access French history and primary source material in the future.
Periods of work experience and volunteering have also enabled me to embrace a practical access to the subject that I love. This summer, I spent a week participating in an archaeological excavation at ----- Roman Fort, excavating and washing finds alongside university students. I have volunteered at -------- Roman Site, where I worked alongside the curator, cataloguing and marking finds from various sites ---------.
Outside of history, I participate widely in my local and school community. I am a Brownie Young Leader, Head Chorister of --------- Church Choir, and last year completed my Silver Duke of Edinburgh Award. In school, I am a member of the school council, and last year spent time tutoring a GCSE English Student. I'm part of the Sixth Form debate club, through which I have improved my confidence, ability to form arguments, and interpretation and judgement skills.
I applied to Hatfield College at Durham, and then to New College, Oxford. I was pooled during interview to, got an offer from, and am now a student at Keble College, Oxford.
General Comments: If you're applying to somewhere that interviews, please make sure you've read all the things you've said you have. Likelihood is, they will ask you about it.
Comments on the statement: I think that my statement illustrates quite well the fact that you don't need to focus too much on extra curricular activities, as I managed to get 5 offers from pretty good universities with only passing reference to anything that I did outside school.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively expresses a genuine passion for history, combining both academic interest and practical experience. It demonstrates strong reading beyond the syllabus, independent research, and thoughtful integration of other subjects to support a well-rounded preparation. The applicant's reflections on different historical perspectives and methodological debates are sophisticated for a pre-university level.
Improvements could include more explicit linking of these interests to future career ambitions or specific skills to be gained from the course. Some details about extracurricular activities could be better connected to transferable skills relevant to university study. Additionally, clarifying ambiguous placeholders for archaeological sites would strengthen credibility.
Overall, this statement is well-structured and tailored for the new UCAS personal statement format, illustrating the student's motivation, academic preparedness, and relevant experiences in a clear and engaging manner.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
Need help with your personal statement? You can ask a question or get feedback from The Student Room community (and our trained personal statement experts) on the personal statement advice forum.
Take a look at some more articles on this topic.
Students are talking about this topic on The Student Room. Catch up with the latest...
Take a look at some more articles on this topic.
Students are talking about this topic on The Student Room. Catch up with the latest...