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Personal Statement - History and Politics 3

This is a real History personal statement written by a student for their university application to Lancaster (History and Politics), Keele (History and Politics), Portsmouth (History and Politics), Canterbury Christ Church (History and Sociology) and Aberdeen (History and Sociology). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

History is a subject that has always enthralled and interested me. I am fascinated with how events have shaped the world around me. What intrigues me the most is how a single event can change everything. As a result, I would love the opportunity to study History at degree level. Studying History has increased my love and interest in the wider world. Discovering how nations, cultures and attitudes have changed, how different people react to political parties and the effect changes in government have on the world around us fascinates me. Arnold Toynbee said: "History is a Greek word which means, literally, just investigation." History is always open to interpretation because we do not know all the motives and reasoning behind actions; that is why I want to further my study of History. I have always been very intuitive, analytical and inquisitive about the world and the past which is why I believe that History is the right subject for me. I hope to become a secondary teacher of History in order to instil curiosity and investigative skills in others.

History is a subject that evokes emotion and intrigue for me. This is why I wish to have the chance to study it at university.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

I am studying History, Drama and Theatre Studies and English Literature. The three subjects are all analytical and open to interpretation which is why I enjoy them. My AS year enabled me to develop skills such as the importance of evaluating evidence. I particularly enjoyed the Politics unit in History as it coincided with the UK General Election, which allowed me to see first hand the changing nature of the political world. English has been supportive to studying History and has taught me valuable skills such as the need for finding evidence; it also opened my eyes to new perspectives and interpretations of language. I particularly enjoyed preparing coursework; it taught me to be independent in my research and to form my own perspectives. Drama is a subject that I have loved since GCSE. Again, it is a subject that allows for creativity, interpretation and analysis, it teaches confidence and independence. It allows creative freedom which is incredibly important to me. My favourite part of the Drama course was the review of the play 'Jerusalem' which allowed interpretation of set, characters and voice. It enabled me to express myself analytically which is a valuable skill when studying the discipline of History.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

I volunteer at a local museum which enables me to learn more about local history. In addition, I have a weekend job at John Lewis in the Beauty Department. It has taught me the importance of human relationships and to be confident in myself and my abilities. Holding down a weekend job whilst studying has helped me learn the importance of time management. In addition, Remaining spare time is spent reading up on the past. My favourite book is Hitler's Gamble by Giles MacDonogh. I am intrigued by the World Wars, particularly in trying to discover the motives and reasoning behind the Axis alliance. I am also interested in the Romanov family of Russia and the role the Bolsheviks played in their demise.

I have a great love of fashion and beauty. I am also interested in youth culture of the 1980's and how it impacts on our experience today. In school, I have been involved with a number of events as a member of the Sixth Form community. I have volunteered in a classroom to help the younger years and it has also helped me to re-establish what I want to do once I have finished university. I helped to direct a school production which is something else that has taught me the value of time management. I have helped to lead a retreat for the Year 7 pupils and I have also been involved with counselling the younger years in a peer mentoring scheme.

Universities applied to:

  • Lancaster (History and Politics)
  • Keele (History and Politics)
  • Portsmouth (History and Politics)
  • Canterbury Christ Church (History and Sociology)
  • Aberdeen (History and Sociology)

Grades achieved:

  • 260 UCAS points

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively conveys a genuine passion for history and politics, demonstrating strong enthusiasm and motivation to pursue the subject at university level. The structure clearly aligns with the new UCAS personal statement format, including detailed personal interests, relevant academic experience, and extracurricular activities.

Strengths:

  • The applicant connects their academic subjects well, showing interdisciplinary skills in analysis and interpretation.
  • Specific examples such as the enjoyment of the Politics unit during a General Election and the museum volunteering experience add depth.
  • References to personal time management and independence are well illustrated through job and directing experience.

Areas for improvement:

  • The statement could be strengthened by linking these experiences more explicitly to how they prepare for university study beyond the description of interests.
  • Some sentences are repetitive in tone; varying sentence structure and adding more concise phrasing could improve readability.
  • Including a clearer explanation of why this particular university course appeals to them might enhance the “Why this subject” section.

Overall, the statement is well-suited to the 2026 onwards UCAS requirements and could be polished with minor adjustments to increase impact and clarity.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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