This is a real International relations personal statement written by a student for their university application to London School of Economics. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
Three years ago I traveled with my University to the second poorest county in America to teach Native American high school students. On this trip I learned about poverty but also how education can provide the training students need to succeed on their own. Two years ago, I studied in London and experienced a new world through international relations classes, being the only American in a group of mainly non-Europeans, and traveling to Western and Eastern Europe. These and other experiences have confirmed my desire to work for an international Non-Governmental Organization promoting literacy, conflict resolution, and humanitarianism. In order to achieve this goal, I am applying to attend the London School of Economics for a master’s degree in International Relations.
As a University student, I have pursued training in education, history, and international relations in America and abroad, with Americans and international students. I will be certified to teach at the end of January and education will always be part of my professional passion because of the change I have seen it make in people’s lives. For example, education has changed my way of thinking. When I began studying in London I always planned on teaching in America, but now I has goals of teaching abroad and working in non-traditional classrooms.
After teaching on the Indian Reservation and studying abroad, I sought other teaching and international experiences that include teaching at a private Korean School in my community, tutoring international and American students, and teaching at the secondary level in the greater Milwaukee, WI area. As a student mentor, I worked with international University students to help them improve their English, adjust to change, and succeed academically and socially in an American university. My training in education has helped me develop and understand the practice and importance of learning in history and international relations. While in London, I studied Latin America during the Cold War and wrote my undergraduate thesis on the coup in Guatemala in 1954. With this knowledge and a subsequent course on genocide and global justice, my attention changed to humanitarian crises where I believe literacy programs empower people, even in times of crisis, to seek constructive change in their communities and cultures.
My diverse, liberal arts education provided me with practical education training, theoretical training from international relations, and understanding through historical context. I have developed skills in both fields so I can teach classes or individuals and research and analyze information. Throughout my undergraduate career I worked at least 2 jobs, remained in the tops 10% of my class, and volunteered as a mentor and tutor. In short, I understand how I function in multiple classroom settings, have learned to motivate myself and others, and value both hard work and service to others. This proven commitment to personal achievement and to my community will help me succeed at LSE in the future.
At my teaching internship, my cooperating teacher constantly reminds the students to ask two questions as they study the world: “What’s in it for me? And what about the human?” My own answers to these questions are intertwined: my own educational and professional goals require a solid education in order to demonstrate the compassion and commitment that I have for “the human.” I have worked hard in the past and will continue to while I meet new people, create memorable experiences, and remember the human.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively communicates a clear motivation for studying international relations, linking academic interests with personal and practical experiences. To strengthen the statement, the applicant could add more specific examples of skills gained from their volunteering and teaching roles, particularly any challenges overcome or leadership experiences. Clarifying the connection between the undergraduate thesis and future goals could provide deeper insight into academic preparedness. Additionally, mentioning any relevant achievements or recognitions formally obtained would enhance credibility. Overall, the statement reflects a thoughtful, compassionate applicant well-suited for the London School of Economics and the new UCAS personal statement format.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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