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Personal Statement - French and German 3

This is a real Languages personal statement written by a student for their university application to Aberystwyth University, University of Liverpool, University of Bristol, University of London Institute in Paris (ULIP) and Newcastle University. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

A degree in modern languages provides someone with the opportunity to communicate with people of different cultures and backgrounds. As the world around us changes, it has become advantageous that the working population speak a tongue other than their own. For me, however, the chance to 'get ahead' in the job market is greatly supplemented by a chance to perfect my knowledge in an area I greatly enjoy.

The French language is one that influences both the worlds of business and international relations as well as those of fashion and food. My A Level course has involved topics on the environment and popular culture giving me both relevant vocabulary, and the chance to explore areas which are not usually studied in other subjects. The study of immigration in the modern world is the section which has interested me most and has led me to consider a future career in diplomacy. Decisions in places such as the EU and UN change the lives of people and is something I desire to be involved in whether through interpretation and translation or civil service work abroad.

Being part of a family with both English and German cultural influences, I have grown up deeply fascinated by the differences between cultures. I travel independently to Germany to visit relatives and friends at every opportunity that arises.

Goethe once said: "He who does not know foreign languages does not know anything about his own." A degree in a foreign language leads one to personal growth in understanding of not just other cultures, but their own. Hard work and dedication are essential and are something I feel I have shown through my in and out of school activities, along with a great enjoyment and aptitude for French and German.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

The French language is one that influences both the worlds of business and international relations as well as those of fashion and food. My A Level course has involved topics on the environment and popular culture giving me both relevant vocabulary, and the chance to explore areas which are not usually studied in other subjects. The study of immigration in the modern world is the section which has interested me most and has led me to consider a future career in diplomacy. Decisions in places such as the EU and UN change the lives of people and is something I desire to be involved in whether through interpretation and translation or civil service work abroad.

I have always sought to extend my knowledge beyond the A Level specification whenever possible and so was keen to take advantage of the opportunity to undertake a week's work experience in Rouen. Working in a restaurant meant that I had the opportunity to converse regularly with a variety of people. My confidence in handling the language whether through understanding or speaking has vastly increased. Throughout the week my knowledge of French allowed me to face new situations. For me the experience was invaluable and allowed me to have a taste of where my language skills could lead in the future. I developed relationships with those I worked with and still regularly speak with them, therefore continuing to develop my fluency.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

I am also an active member of the school community. Producing the school newspaper 'Abbey Alive' for three years has required dedication and commitment, something which I believe is essential for success in language learning at degree level. Working towards deadlines and in a team with others was essential to obtain a pleasing final product. Being a history mentor in Year 12 has helped me learn how to succinctly explain events to others who are unsure or lack understanding. In Year 11 I was made a prefect and now as a senior prefect I am in a position of responsibility within the school itself. This, I feel, has pushed me to increase in maturity and step forward when extra help is needed both in and out of school.

In my spare time I volunteer as a Young Leader at my local Brownie pack, running ninety-minute sessions for girls aged 7 to 10 years. Leading and arranging the meetings has developed my organisational skills, something which I have been able to transfer into school life, through prioritising and efficiently working through my workload.

I am under no illusions that a languages degree involves a lot of hard work and dedication, something which is shown through my 11 year membership to my church choir. I currently hold the position of Head Chorister, which involves being responsible for the organisation of the younger choristers. This has helped make me more confident in taking on a leadership role and speaking out when something needs addressing or discussing.

Universities applied to:

  • Aberystwyth University
  • University of Liverpool
  • University of Bristol
  • University of London Institute in Paris (ULIP)
  • Newcastle University

Grades achieved:

  • Psychology (A2) - B
  • French (A2) - B
  • History (A2) - B
  • Business Studies (AS) - C

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively conveys the applicant's passion for French and German languages and their cultural contexts, showing clear motivation for studying modern languages. The inclusion of a specific work experience in Rouen and independent travel to Germany strengthens the demonstration of practical language skills and cultural immersion. The statement also highlights leadership and commitment through extracurricular roles such as producing the school newspaper, mentoring, and leading a Brownie pack, which reflect key skills valuable in higher education and beyond. To improve, the candidate could integrate more explicit connections between their qualifications and how these will directly support their university studies, making the transition smoother for admissions tutors reviewing the new UCAS personal statement format. Additionally, a bit more detail about specific academic achievements or coursework relevant to the course could further solidify preparedness. Overall, it is a well-crafted personal statement aligned with the expectations for 2026 and beyond.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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