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French single honours personal statement

This is a real Languages personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

When I speak French I find a new energy and rhythm to my speech. When I read literature I revel in being transported to another world. My confidence in speaking comes from time spent in Provence and Burgundy, and through French exchanges. Currently I am attending a Modern Languages course as part of Access to Bristol. My interest in French literature has grown from a delight in reading English literature and studying French history. Recently I have become engrossed in Voltaire’s philosophical novel ‘Candide’, and his questioning of religious morals. I was struck by Voltaire’s forthright exposition of the bestialities of humankind. These experiences continue to stimulate my desire to study French at University and pursue a career in languages.

Since a young age I have been involved in theatre, attending Bristol Old Vic Youth sessions and taking lead roles in plays from The Spanish Golden Age and Shakespeare. Molière’s work fascinates me: inspired by Laurent Tirard’s film ‘Molière’, I saw a vivacious Commedia Dell'arte style production of ‘Le Médecin Malgré Lui’ in Paris this year. My enjoyment of European theatre and world cinema has directed me to the bizarre films of Jean-Pierre Jeunet and the raw style of Cédric Klapisch. I soon became absorbed by the intimate nature of Klapisch’s film ‘Les Poupées Russes’. The attraction of European films for me is their sincere and realistic portrayal of daily life. Reading Chaucer’s ‘Canterbury Tales’ revealed the close links between French and Middle English and introduced me to the French Medieval ‘Fabliau’ genre.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Poetry uses emotive language with a power like no other form of literature. When studying Shakespeare’s use of iambic pentameter, which mimics the rhythm of English speech, I noticed the very different, more regular rhythm in French poetry. I began to wonder how French poems compare with those in other languages and whether poetry is in fact translatable. For me, writing in French is more pleasurable than writing in my own tongue; exploring the gorgeously delicate sounds of French and the eccentricity of the grammar system. Singing in Bristol Schools’ Chamber Choir I have discovered exquisite music, including Fauré’s ‘Cantique de Jean Racine’, and enjoyed the beautiful phonetics of the French language. A poet who is similarly driven by emotion and who continues to influence me is Charles Baudelaire. At Oxford Summer School this year I studied in depth his poem ‘À Une Passante’. I found Baudelaire’s Industrial Paris rather busy next to Zola’s almost desolate depiction of the city in ‘Thérèse Raquin’. I discovered Zola and his impassioned protagonist, Thérèse, through attending fortnightly A2 French classes during my AS year.

As a result of reading about current affairs in Le Monde, I researched Marriage Equality in France for my French AS Oral exam. I have recently become more politically driven, becoming a member of the Labour Party and of Labour LGBT since July 2012. Always striving to be at the top of my field in whatever I do, I am a hockey goalkeeper for a women’s team, and was selected for Junior Regional hockey.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

I am willing to throw myself into whatever University has to offer, balancing commitment to studying alongside other activities. I regularly contribute to the French department in school, helping out in GCSE lessons and leading activities at language events. Through my instigation of a weekly French workshop for students who excel in French, I feel that I am able to inspire others. Correspondingly, possessing the ability to speak French and Spanish confidently enables me to explore foreign culture. My flair for language was demonstrated having come top of the class in AS French and English Literature. I believe that languages are key in this modern world, shaping culture, and it is through language that we are able to grasp a greater sense of the world. I would cherish the opportunity at University to study with others who are equally passionate.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

  • This personal statement has a strong and genuine passion for French language and culture, effectively illustrated with specific examples from literature, theatre, film, and politics.
  • The structure is now clear and aligned with the new UCAS personal statement format introduced for 2026, enhancing readability and impact.
  • To improve, the applicant could link their qualifications and experiences more explicitly to the skills required for university-level French study, such as language proficiency, critical analysis, or intercultural communication.
  • Including any concrete future goals related to the course or career path in languages would strengthen the "Why" section.
  • Although the statement demonstrates a variety of interests outside formal education, expanding on how these experiences developed transferable skills (teamwork, leadership, communication) would add value.
  • Overall, the personal statement creates an authentic voice and compelling narrative which should engage admissions tutors effectively.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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