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Personal Statement:Modern and Medieval Languages 2

This is a real Languages personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

My passion for languages stems from their inherent multiplicity of roles: languages serve as the primary vehicle of communication, but they also facilitate our understanding of the world. Society is enriched by the diversity of cultures and literary heritages that languages promote. Without an understanding of languages, the world of literature and culture is permanently inaccessible. Im Westen Nichts Neues by Remarque is a perfect example, allowing one to observe the brutality of war from the opposition's perspectives—this is clearly unachievable without a sound understanding of German. My appreciation of other cultures lies at the heart of my aspiration to pursue the study of languages in higher education.

My enthusiasm for German rapidly flourished shortly after secondary school commenced. Before embarking on my study of GCSE German, I independently developed my basic understanding of the language through online exchanges with German peers. The process of learning the language by myself later proved invaluable in terms of my capacity to quickly grasp the syntax and complex grammatical structures of German. Visiting Germany in March 2011 on a nine-day exchange was an enriching experience, enhanced by my burgeoning capacity to think and dream in German.

This July, I was one of fifteen people selected nationally to spend a week studying German at the UNIQ Summer School at Oxford University. I relished the opportunity to explore aspects of German culture, such as film and poetry, which I had not previously studied. At Oxford, I was immensely inspired by a lecture on Kafka and researched further into some of his most controversial works. In Die Verwandlung and Das Urteil I particularly admire Kafka's ability to use the protagonists, Gregor and Georg, as mechanisms to express his inner thoughts, especially through surreal situations such as Gregor's dramatic transformation.

I am inspired by the challenge of becoming fluent in Italian in four years. I am greatly interested in Italy's rich musical and cultural heritage and have been influenced by Italian composers such as Boccherini from a very early age. Teaching myself the basics of Italian is stimulating: I love the lyrical beauty of Romance languages.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

My A-level subject combination may be unusual compared to a typical language student but I strongly feel breadth has enhanced my studies. The logical thought processes obtained through mathematics are easily transferable to the skills required in translation and in constructing grammatically accurate sentences. More importantly, the study of sciences has sparked my interest in the field of linguistics, which I am currently investigating through my extended project on the way semantics and syntax affect thought processes.

My interest and appreciation of German literature has flourished through my study of several works. For example, Dürrenmatt's Der Besuch der alten Dame demonstrates the moral dilemma that the power of money can wield. Reading Die Physiker is also entertaining. I especially value Dürrenmatt's attempt to keep his plays mildly humorous, whilst still maintaining the seriousness of the plot. This juxtaposition of humour and ethical tension keeps the reader enthralled.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

For 11 years, I have been studying the piano, regularly performing in classical concerts. Furthermore, through music I have been able to explore the musical cultures of Germany and Italy.

I have received numerous language awards: in 2010, I was presented with the award for achieving the highest language results in the history of my school and in June 2011 I received a commendation for my exceptional commitment to AS German.

I am a determined and enthusiastic student motivated by my passion for languages. I look forward to the challenge of pursuing my love of languages through the study of German and Italian at university.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively captures a strong enthusiasm and well-rounded preparation for studying German and Italian. The inclusion of personal anecdotes, such as the language exchange and Oxford UNIQ Summer School experience, enriches the content and demonstrates initiative. To improve, the applicant could more explicitly connect their qualifications and experiences to how they will succeed specifically in university study. Adding a brief mention of career aspirations or long-term goals related to language skills could add focus to the motivation section. Additionally, clarifying or expanding on the role of the extended project would strengthen the academic preparation aspect in line with best practices for new UCAS personal statements. Overall, the statement shows genuine passion and diverse interests, well aligned with the 2026 UCAS guidelines.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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