Law degree personal statement example (1x)

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Without the law, society will cease to exist as we know it. It is of vital importance, and protects individuals from the major power of corporations and the Government. Law is constantly evolving in order to adapt to an ever changing world. It is for these reasons that I believe I should study such an important subject.

In October last year I travelled to Liuyang China with a group of students from my 6th form. Here, we visited a school for a week, teaching students English and giving them an insight into Western culture. This trip was an amazing experience, and left me with the desire to help others less fortunate than myself. I believe studying Law will enable me to do this, as lawyers give a voice to those who may otherwise not be aware of their rights and I would like to be involved in legal aid work. After our trip, I participated in a fund raising effort to sponsor a few of the less privileged Chinese students to enable them to visit the Isle of Man and London. This was a huge success, giving them an invaluable opportunity to improve their English, as well as the experience to view life in the Western World as they had never left China.

Studying Law will be a challenge that I will relish. I very much look forward to embarking into Higher Education.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

This year I had the privilege of being appointed Head Girl by members of staff and voted form captain by my peers. These roles give me extra responsibilities and challenges to face, including chairing both the student council and the sixth form committee, and I look forward to these. With regards to my chosen subjects for A level, I wanted to study a diverse range of subjects so to acquire a variety of skills, which I believe are necessary in the study of law.

As well as A Levels, this year I took on the extra commitment of Young Enterprise. Forming a business with my peers showed me that compromise is needed in order to work as a team. We rose to every challenge we were faced with and ended up winning the ‘best product’ prize on the Isle of Man. Hard work and dedication were essential to run a successful Young Enterprise company, and I believe the same qualities are necessary for a Law degree.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Recently some of my free time has been spent in the Isle of Man Courts of Justice observing the courts in session. I found it fascinating how much responsibility a barrister has, and I feel that I am mature enough to cope with these demands. One of the more high profile cases that I observed was even reported on in the Manx newspapers, which reminded me of how much focus is on law.

Since the age of 14, I have had a part time job. I currently work at the bookshop ‘Waterstone’s’. This has developed my maturity and independence. I enjoy working, and feel at a loss in the holidays if I don’t have anything to do. Working at Waterstone’s has also fuelled my love of reading fiction novels, which I find helps me to relax.

A long term interest of mine is dancing. Since the age of 5 I have learnt ballet and tap dancing, passing exams up to grade 6 in both. My commitment to dancing helps me to relax, but at the same time I have to be focused to remember all the routines. As well as dancing I enjoy playing netball for my school team. I find this helps me to work effectively as a team. In the past I have both swam and played badminton for the respective island teams.

Due to differing legislation on the Isle of Man, I was able to pass my driving test first time at the age of 16. This acquired skill allows me to go on long drives in the Manx countryside, a pastime which I find very enjoyable.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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