This is a real Law personal statement written by a student for their university application to Birmingham, York, Hull, Aberystwyth and College of Law London. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
I remember a class debate at Primary School about whether or not school uniforms should be mandatory. My classmates so infuriated me with their arguments that I just couldn’t stop myself from responding and, at the end, my teacher told me I had a career in arguing. Since then, the idea of fighting for just causes and helping people win their arguments has become something that has shaped how I picture myself in the future.
This ambition was a large factor in my decision to take A level Law, and despite my apprehension about specialising in law so soon, through my study, I have only felt encouraged to pursue law at university. I have gained a greater appreciation of social and moral issues, and thrived in a subject I find to be so relevant to everyday life. I find it fascinating how, in law, one must think about the psychological elements of crime as well as an actual act.
By studying Law, I want to learn skills necessary to represent people who are repressed and ignored in society. For me, playing a role in the successful pursuit of justice is a great motivation. One area of Law that interests me particularly is the law surrounding assisted suicide and euthanasia and I took particular interest in the case of DPP v Purdy and its ruling during Law classes.
By studying Law at university, I hope to become one step closer to my long anticipated vision of arguing and making a strong case for a living.
As well as taking Law, I also study History at A level which has also been a huge help for potentially studying Law. The skills I have honed through studying History, such as critical skills, analytical skills and putting forward valid arguments are ones I believe I will need frequently in the legal sphere. At High School, I was awarded the History prize for my year in three consecutive years, showing command of the necessary skills for History, many of which overlap into Law. I have excelled in my other subject, English Literature. This subject’s main skill base includes interpreting and analysing texts, making judgements and supporting them whilst discussing other interpretations. I believe all of these skills make me an excellent potential Law candidate and my grades reflect my capability to employ these skills.
My work experience in an office of solicitors further fuelled my eagerness to study Law. A lawyer’s workload surprised me, however I soon realised I would relish such a challenge. To be able to work and apply all the skills I will have acquired on actual cases, with the potential of highly rewarding outcomes hugely appeals to me. Volunteer work like being a member of the Youth SVP group gave me a strong sense of being proactive in the community. Fundraising, visiting homes for the elderly and helping organise Christmas parties all improved my social and organisational skills as well as demonstrating my ability to work well in a team.
As a person, I am enthusiastic, outgoing and dependable. I have a strong work ethic and am generally highly motivated to achieve to the best of my ability. Having recently lost three stone, I spend my free time maintaining a healthy lifestyle by taking long walks and I have developed an interest in cooking and try to prepare all meals I eat myself.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively conveys a clear passion for law grounded in both academic interest and personal experience. The applicant successfully links early motivations with later academic choices and extracurricular activities, providing good evidence of relevant skills. To further strengthen the statement for 2026 and beyond, the applicant could explicitly highlight transferable skills like teamwork, communication, and resilience. Additionally, incorporating reflections on how university study in law will build specific skills or address particular challenges could showcase a more forward-looking mindset. Overall, the authentic voice and detailed examples make this a strong foundation for the new UCAS personal statement format.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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