This is a real Mathematics personal statement written by a student for their university application to Cambridge, LSE, UCL, Warwick and Bristol. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
Every day we make decisions and interact with others; the laws of economics help us make rational choices and consider the irrationality of others, as well as understand the world better. Maths and statistics are the necessary tools for me to understand the modern economics. Being raised in China, I have witnessed the rapid development of my home city, the huge wealth gap and experienced the struggles of dealing with inflation.
I love behaviour economics because I believe the well-being of the economy ultimately depends on people's decision. I want to prove that by predicting their behaviours correctly we can create a much more efficient economy. I became familiar with game theory by reading 'Prisoner's Dilemma' by William Poundstone, and it made me realise that the US Election campaign is no more than a game of two players outdoing each other for popular votes by campaigning for different policies.
I further studied the theory by reading 'Games of Strategy' by Avinash Dixit. I have learned how the Nash Equilibrium can be found in a continuous function, and I applied it to predict the US election campaign outcome. I frequently think as a game theorist; I found that the monetary and fiscal policies decided by the Bank of England and the government on inflation targets can be modelled by a two-player game, I discovered that the Nash Equilibrium outcome does not help to achieve the inflation target effectively.
I criticised the Prospect Theory for its ignorance of the individual's value system such as the culture and ideological difference, and the frequent failures to adjust to the neoclassical model, seeking alternative superior factors that should be taken into account such as confidence. My EPQ investigated how game theory is used to predict people's behaviour alone with its limitations.
I am strongly mathematically inclined and I love the satisfaction obtained from thinking and solving complex problems. After reading 'A Concise Introduction to Pure Mathematics' by Martin Liebeck, I appreciated the fundamentals of maths through the proofs in set theory, I particularly enjoyed in the proof on the existence of gaps on the number line, and how we can construct real numbers to fill these gaps, although the numbers seem inherently natural, but they are just an imaginary concept to describe what we see in the real world.
I love Maths because of its applications to the real world economic phenomena, such as using Cobweb theory to explain the invisible hand. After reading 'Essential Mathematics for Economics and Business' by Teresa Bradley, I learned and applied the Difference Equation to predict the daily number of customers in the restaurant I work in which I estimated the revenue by using differentiation. As my schools sole candidate for Additional Further Maths A2, I studied statistics in greater depth, such as using the t-student and F-distribution and I was then able to calculate the confidence interval for my revenue estimation, which we deal with all the time in the real world. I also provide courses on mathematical economics to my classmates.
I founded the school's Investment Club and I provide seminars weekly. We participated in The Student Investor Challenge. I have also made a good return with my small personal investment portfolio. I have become familiar with fundamental and technical analysis, such as using PE ratio. I have also received the 'UBS award for outstanding students'. My initiative has greatly contributed to my leadership and presentation skills.
Outside school, I play tennis and I have designed Maths revision websites. Debating club has improved my confidence in public speaking. As a prefect, I am responsible for organising events. Broader knowledge and teamwork are the two key assets I obtained through participating in these activities. I am enthusiastic and believe my achievements demonstrate an ability to thrive and enjoy the challenging course.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively showcases a strong passion for economics, mathematics, and their intersection, which is essential for the Mathematics with Economics course. The applicant successfully integrates personal experiences, like witnessing economic changes in China and their reading-driven understanding of game theory and behavioural economics. Their academic preparation is clear, with evidence of advanced mathematical knowledge and applications relevant to economics, such as statistics and difference equations. Leadership and extracurricular activities, especially founding an Investment Club and public speaking, add valuable dimensions beyond academics.
To improve, the statement could benefit from clearer structural signposting and slightly tighter focus to enhance readability and impact. Explaining briefly how some theoretical interests directly relate to future course goals could strengthen motivation cues. Also, reducing minor informal language (e.g., "lol") and including reflections on how setbacks, such as the Cambridge interview, motivated growth would add resilience and maturity. Overall, this is a strong, well-rounded personal statement aligned with the new UCAS personal statement format and expectations.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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