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Mathematics degree personal statement example (1b)

This is a real Mathematics personal statement written by a student for their university application to Coventry. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

For me, maths is more than a study of numbers and patterns. It is a way of thought. An analytical and logical outlook of the world. I first discovered this in primary school, under the guidance of a retired mathematician, who showed me the beauty of maths, even beyond the classroom. Each week, he introduced me to a new concept, a new puzzle or a new challenge which would fuel my inquisitive nature and my desire to learn more.

Since then, my love of maths has developed and I have continued to explore the subject both in and outside of school. Alongside my GCSE, I undertook a Free Standing Mathematics Qualification in additional maths. Similarly, I am currently undertaking an AS in further maths in addition to my other A Levels. I opted to do these extra qualifications in order to develop my skill and aptitude in maths and challenge myself in my favourite subject.

I have also attended a maths conference at Solihull College, where I learnt about the practical uses of maths in everyday life. I also recently attended two lectures at Birmingham University which explored how maths is applied in climate models and the maths of chance and probability. Another conference I attended was held at Adrian Boult Hall in Birmingham and through these out of school events I have been able to gain an insight into the importance of maths in society.

I am a hardworking and enthusiastic student, who is motivated by challenges and puzzles from which I can gain new skills and insight. I believe mathematics is a subject which will allow me to fully reach my potential and I look forward to studying it at university.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Alongside my formal studies, I am currently undertaking an AS in further maths in addition to my other A Levels. These qualifications have helped me deepen my understanding and challenge myself in complex mathematical concepts beyond the standard curriculum.

I am currently involved in an original group research project on sleep and have completed an extended project exploring the effects of bariatric surgery. My involvement in these projects has helped to develop my independent study skills as well as my research technique; this will prove useful during the course of my higher education.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

My passion for maths has also led me to take up a number of other opportunities outside of academics. These include being appointed the role of treasurer for the School Council and managing a company in the Young Enterprise programme which went on to take part in the regional competition and made a healthy profit.

In the past two years, I have also undertaken 4 weeks of work experience at a local primary school where I was involved in helping out during numeracy lessons and running a lunchtime Maths club for the pupils. I also helped the students in their business workshop where I helped supervise and aid money management. I am also currently involved in providing maths tuition to year 7 students within my local area, aiding them with basic mathematical concepts such as algebra.

Through various other experiences, I have developed a number of interpersonal skills which will help me to work successfully at university and allow me to work towards a career in teaching. I am currently head of both the School Council and the school’s Cultural Awareness Society. I am also editor of the Sixth form magazine, have completed a Sports Leadership Award and was a peer mentor for younger pupils. These roles have developed both my leadership and communication skills.

I am able to work as a member of a team, and this is a skill which I have developed as a member of various school sports teams and societies. For example, I worked within a group on an online project, aiming to ease the transition for students entering sixth form. These skills were also developed when I achieved the Duke of Edinburgh Bronze Award.

In my spare time I enjoy reading books, especially crime fiction, which allows me to apply my logical thinking skills. I also enjoy writing poetry, some of which has appeared in books and charity newsletters such as Frishta. I play badminton and football for leisure and find that maintaining my fitness improves my ability to remain positive in all aspects of life.

Universities applied to:

  • Coventry

Grades achieved:

  • Maths (A2) - A
  • Further maths (AS) - A
  • bio (A2) - A*
  • chem (A2) - A

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

Great section on attending conferences and lectures but these can be expanded. What did you find interesting? Which talks inspired you?

Good to see dedication to maths through extra-curricular activities, you can probably cut down a bit on the skills here.

Final sentence is an excellent way to tie off the personal statement as it links back to the interest and course.

Extra-curricular section is a bit too long.

Needs more detail on the academic side of things and what interested you from them and why.

Structure of the personal statement is lacking, not a lot of cohesion between sections.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement shows a clear and genuine passion for mathematics, successfully linking early inspiration to academic pursuits and extracurricular activities. The inclusion of conferences, lectures, and detailed applications of maths beyond the classroom strengthens the applicant's motivation for the course. To improve, the applicant could elaborate more on specific academic topics or experiences that sparked their interest and deepen the explanations of the conferences and research projects to provide clearer insights. The extracurricular section is comprehensive but could be streamlined for better focus, emphasizing the most relevant experiences. Enhancing cohesion between sections will help the overall flow, improving readability and impact in line with new UCAS personal statement expectations.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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