This is a real Media and communication personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
Journalism is my chosen degree to study as I have a enthusiastic interest for news locally, nationally and international. After my degree my ideal career would be a journalist in one of over 100 regional and local daily papers in the UK.
I developed a keen interest in journalism throughout my active role in the sixth form. As well as studying History and Geography, I study English. With English being my passion, my ability to write in a style that is interesting to read and understand has improved.
My first year of sixth form was a course of AS levels. My ability to work hard, especially under pressure, and the requirement to meet deadlines was enhanced.
Commitment, determination, persistence and communication are fundamentally key skills I have accomplished during time in the sixth form, supported by an Asdan University Award, which was granted after the completion of three challenges, which included learning to play a piano, learning to drive a car and working with a local brownie group.
All challenges required key skills for success, "working with others", problem solving and developing own learning. Currently I still help at the Brownies, qualifying for my millennium volunteers award.
My interest is supported by the work experience in which I have participated at my local newspaper, The ****** Courant. A new approach is required as every day a new story can be found. I soon became committed and willing to work irregular hours and put the needs of the job before a social life.
Letters expressing my personal opinions have been published in regional newspapers. I have appeared on television discussing the recent foot and mouth disaster, and stating how the calamity has affected our local community and educational studies.
For the past four years I have worked as a part time waitress and receptionist. These roles involve using computers, taking bookings, dealing with requests, complaints, compliments, handling money, and dealing with customers. I have developed good communication skills and I am confidently able to listen as well as talk.
Living in a rural location, I am an energetic member of the young farmers club and an effective team player, participating in sporting events, quizzes, debating and public speaking competitions.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement clearly expresses a strong motivation to study journalism, supported by relevant experience and extracurricular involvement. To improve, the applicant could provide more specific examples of skills gained from their studies and work experience, linking these more explicitly to journalism competencies like investigation and multimedia skills. Adding any achievements or feedback related to published work could also strengthen impact. Maintaining the authentic voice while expanding on how experiences prepare them for university-level study will enhance relevance for the new UCAS personal statement format.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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