This is a real Media and communication personal statement written by a student for their university application to Manchester Metroplitan University (Web Development), University of Salford (Internet Tech & Multimedia) and University of Leeds (New Media). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
Since the internet was introduced to me at an early age, I always aspired to use the internet to benefit myself or other people. I realised that the internet is a powerful tool capable of solving any problem. Whenever using the internet I always find myself analysing the design and functionality of websites - how they could be improved, what makes them successful.
I became fascinated with web design when I got my first computer several years ago, spending hours experimenting with CSS and HTML coding. I have continued to spend a lot of my time with computers as the majority of work produced in my BTEC National Diploma in Art and Design course involved using Adobe Creative Suite. I feel my passion for design and computing is a good combination that is relevant to this course as well as my desire to learn.
I want to attend university to learn as much as possible about web development and become part of a web design company after graduation. During the year between now and the beginning of the university course I will be learning web frameworks and programming languages such as Ruby on Rails, Perl and PHP. I will also be developing web applications and designing graphics for a Manchester based internet company.
As a person I am organized, punctual and a quick learner. I enjoy problem solving and motivating myself, which I feel plays a key part in learning how to use programming languages and creating websites. I specialised in graphics for my BTEC course which involved working around design briefs to produce digital and print media, I found these projects the most interesting as I enjoy designing around specifications.
Working as a group or independently played a big part in all of my college courses, from producing presentations to the class, to carrying out fieldwork or experiments. I feel these characteristics will help me excel in this course and provide me with the skills required to be successful within the web development industry.
I have recently designed my own website which I use as a portfolio and a place to practice using HTML, CSS and PHP.
In my spare time I enjoy reading, music, travelling, art and socialising, these have all led me to use the internet to research and keep updated with my interests. I have benefited greatly from applying the internet to my hobbies, which is another reason why I aspire to become a web developer.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively conveys a genuine passion for web development and demonstrates relevant skills gained through the BTEC Art and Design course and independent project work. To further strengthen it for the new UCAS personal statement format, consider more explicitly linking qualifications to specific course requirements and providing clearer examples of problem-solving experiences. Adding detail about teamwork and communication skills during practical projects would enhance demonstration of transferable skills valued by universities. Additionally, checking for consistency in university names and correcting typographical errors (e.g., 'Manchester Metroplitan') would improve professionalism. Overall, the statement is clear and engaging and aligns well with expectations for 2026 and beyond.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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