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Personal Statement:Medical Biochemistry 1

This is a real Medicine personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

My fascination with Science developed at a young age owing to the fact that both my parents and brother are employed in the medical industry. Both my parents are registered nurses and my brother, a biomedical scientist. But it was my brother's profession that most enthral me, thus enthused me in his area of expertise. Hence, I am encouraged to follow my brother's footsteps and resolve to take Medical Biochemistry.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Since coming here in England in 2001, I became more proficient in the use of English language to communicate verbally with others. Although I was very well trained to use English language in verbal and written communication when I was still in the Philippines, being here in the United Kingdom gave me the opportunity to practice what I have learned.

But, not only was I able to practice English language by studying here in England, I also got the chance to take 'A' levels in Chemistry and Maths which I confidently believe will help me in my chosen career.

Also, I have taken AS Business Studies and Psychology as I feel it is important to have a wide understanding of the diverse behaviours and thoughts of people. This year, I have decided that I will re-sit some of the modules I have taken in AS Chemistry and Maths to make my qualification even higher. It is good to mention that I have achieved a grade of 'BB' for my General Certificate of Secondary Education (GCSE) double award sciences and a grade of 'A' for my Maths, which reinforced my aspiration to pursue the course.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

To broaden my horizon, I have indulged myself in other fields such as basic computer programming. Having my own computer facility and Internet access at home has not only allowed me to search for topics concerning Maths and Chemistry but also to develop my computer skills.

My work experience in Career Town Centre as one of the administrative aides has enabled me to meet and work effectively with various people.

And though I never had the chance to undergo any training regarding medical practice, I do believe that I would be able to cope with whatever challenges I will meet while pursuing the career I've chosen to obtain.

I believe that my being practical and reasonable, as well as being punctual and organised will be advantageous in studying in the University. I also do believe that I am self-motivated, committed, patient and creative and have personally proven that fact very early in life when I taught myself how to play a guitar and master piano playing, thus proving that I love diversity as well. Though I am at times timid and quiet, I usually overcome my shyness when I learn more about the people I meet. But all in all, I know that with my qualities, beliefs and experiences, I am equipped to go through the university with flying colours.

Grades achieved:

  • BB (GCSE double award sciences)
  • A (Maths)

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement provides a clear motivation for studying Medical Biochemistry, linking family influence and personal passion effectively. The candidate demonstrates awareness of relevant qualifications and a willingness to improve through resits, which shows commitment and responsibility. Including work experience and extracurricular skills like basic programming enriches the profile and indicates a broad skill set. To improve, the statement would benefit from greater focus on specific aspects of the course content that appeal to the candidate and clearer examples of skills directly relevant to Medical Biochemistry. The language could be refined for clarity and grammatical accuracy while retaining the authentic voice. Explicitly mentioning universities applied to and tailoring parts of the statement to those institutions could also strengthen the application under the 2026 UCAS format.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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