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Personal Statement:Music 6

This is a real Music personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Like many, my love of music was first cultivated through my love of performing. However, over time I realised that my true interests lie in studying music as an academic discipline. For me, the sheer beauty of music is its ability to communicate emotion. I believe that it is far from mere coincidence that we speak of harmonic ‘vocabulary’ or associate cadences with punctuation. Music is fundamentally a language; it is a form of communication. However, it is far less defined than the spoken word. This makes music subjective and it is this subjectivity that intrigues me. It encourages musical debate in which I look forward to participating whilst at university.

The thing that attracts me most about studying music at degree level is the vast array of sub-disciplines it encompasses. From something as mathematically involved as advanced musical analysis (Set-theoretical in particular) to the artistic freedom of composition, music is a remarkably broad field. I see musical study as essentially an exploration of human culture, but through a unique and incredibly stimulating medium. This is, of course, the fundamental premise of ethnomusicology. Nonetheless, the same approaches are as applicable to Western Art Music. Musicology at this interface is one area I hope to explore further.

My recent experience at a Cambridge University Sutton Trust Summer School affirmed my desire to study a music related course in higher education. I am extremely excited about my enrolment onto a degree course and look forward to speaking with you at interview.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Always keen to explore beyond my A Level syllabus, I have recently subscribed to Music Theory Spectrum and have read Nicholas Cook’s ‘Music: A Very Short Introduction’ and ‘A Guide To Musical Analysis.’ The former was an accessible insight into thinking philosophically about music while the latter presented a fascinating critical response to contemporary analyses, each of which was introduced very sympathetically.

My other A level subjects, namely Chemistry and Maths, complement music well. Both revolve around recognising and manipulating patterns. Their aim is to rationalise and bring order to the natural chaos of the universe. Similarly, the principles of tonality are designed to bring order and hierarchy to what could otherwise be perceived as musical chaos. I have always had a natural flair for maths as well as passion for the subject. I can think of nothing more convincing or rigorous than using mathematical models to prove a hypothesis. I enjoy very much the process of discovering algebraic proofs and hope to develop this skill in the future.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Outside College I have a very active life. I am Principal Horn in Luton Youth Concert Band, Wind Ensemble and Orchestra, as well as a member of Bedfordshire Youth County Orchestra. I am a keen singer and a member of an amateur dramatics group. I feel that these endeavours have helped me mature as both a performer and musician. I have achieved ABRSM Grade 8 merit on my Horn and plan to take an ATCL diploma in left-handed piano in 2008. A particular strength of mine is a willingness to be flexible and diverse in my interests. Recently, I took on the role of editor for my College team in the T.E.S Newsday Competition. We finished second overall in this prestigious national event. I have recently joined the College’s debating society with whom I intend to enter the national competition, ‘Debating Matters.’ I have taken a one year course run by NFTE which, taken independently from my studies, allowed me to create and run a small enterprise. This helped me develop my skills in teamwork and organisation, attributes which will undoubtedly prove valuable at university.

Grades achieved:

  • ABRSM Grade 8 merit

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement effectively conveys a genuine passion for music both as a performing and academic discipline, which aligns well with the expectations of the new UCAS personal statement format. The candidate successfully integrates specific interests, such as musical linguistics and ethnomusicology, providing a strong rationale for studying the subject. The academic preparation is clearly outlined with reference to further reading and complementary subjects, showcasing an analytical mindset and relevant cross-disciplinary skills.

To improve further, the applicant could add more explicit reflection on how their experiences outside formal education, such as music performances and involvement in competitions, will contribute to their university studies and personal development. Including any specific skills developed or challenges overcome in these activities can strengthen the statement’s impact. Additionally, mentioning particular universities or courses applied to would enhance relevance and demonstrate focused ambition.

Overall, the statement is well-structured and maintains a coherent narrative while preserving the authentic voice of the applicant, which is vital for the new UCAS personal statements.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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