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Personal Statement:Pharmacy 10

This is a real Pharmacy personal statement written by a student for their university application to St Georges University of London (Medicine), University of Bristol (Medicine), University of Leeds (Medicine), University of East Anglia (Medicine) and University of Nottingham (Pharmacy). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

I would like to study pharmacy as I would like to play an integral part helping to cure illnesses, but also to understand how this takes place. I want to understand the biology and chemistry behind how drugs work, as I am passionate about these subjects. Pharmacists play a vital role as an intermediate between patients and doctors, verifying that correct medication has been prescribed and that the patient fully understands the instructions of the doctor. I believe I am very suitable for this role.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Earlier this year, I arranged one week of work experience at Manson's Chemist which included serving customers and assisting with retail tasks. I delivered prescriptions to patients unable to collect them. Through this experience, I gained more awareness of the role pharmacists have in the NHS and learnt that patient involvement is not restricted to doctors and nurses; pharmacists also play an important role in hospitals as clinical pharmacists.

During the summer, I received a prestigious Nuffield Bursary at the University of East London where I conducted 4 weeks of research on the anti-cancer properties of Scutellaria Barbata, a plant used in herbal medicine. I was required to plan, devise and implement protocols followed by the team I was working with, which enhanced my personal organisational skills. I considered the ethical implications of the plant as the variation of its quality could render it unsafe. I learnt about the rigorous procedures required in drug manufacturing, as well as the scientific equipment such as HPLC and NMR used within this process. Upon completion, I received an Exscitec Platinum award from Imperial College London.

I have undertaken a series of biology masterclasses at Queen Mary University where I learn about chemical aspects of biology and its role in healthcare. In addition, I like to keep abreast of innovations and advancements in health, science and technology by reading magazines such as the Student BMJ and New Scientist.

My academic achievements include Maths (A2) - A, Chemistry (A2) - A, Biology (A2) - B, and Physics (A2) - B. These subjects have provided me with a solid foundation for understanding pharmaceutical sciences.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

I also arranged work experience at Victoria NHS Walk-In Centre where I worked alongside doctors, nurses, and administrative staff. I learnt to appreciate the importance of every member of staff and how they interact together. However, this opportunity also highlighted difficulties health professionals face, such as patients unwilling to cooperate or resorting to dishonesty to receive medical treatment.

I enjoy helping out in the community. I have volunteered for 4 months at Dakken House nursing home where I made some observations about the suffering patients face. I have seen how human contact and interaction improve the quality of their lives. In my secondary school, I taught mathematics over a period of five months to pupils of a range of ages and abilities, which developed my teaching and leadership skills. In college, I volunteered at open days and at the chemistry club where I helped students extend their knowledge of chemistry. In all these experiences, clarity of information was imperative.

My hobbies include running and weightlifting, which allow me to set goals I want to achieve and aid the development of my motivation and determination. I enjoy karate as it helps me cope under high pressure and is an excellent physical discipline. I also learn tajweed, the art of reciting the Quran fluently, which requires a great deal of concentration.

My experiences have allowed me to gain an invaluable insight into the pharmaceutical industry. I have seen that pharmacy is an essential component in the NHS and a career that I look forward to.

Universities applied to:

  • St Georges University of London (Medicine)
  • University of Bristol (Medicine)
  • University of Leeds (Medicine)
  • University of East Anglia (Medicine)
  • University of Nottingham (Pharmacy)

Grades achieved:

  • Maths (A2) - A
  • Chemistry (A2) - A
  • Biology (A2) - B
  • Physics (A2) - B

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement demonstrates a strong motivation to study pharmacy, clearly linking passion for biology and chemistry with aspirations to impact patient care. The candidate effectively integrates academic achievements and relevant work experience, including detailed descriptions of research and NHS work placements, which evidence preparedness for the course. The inclusion of community volunteering and extracurricular activities highlights valuable transferable skills such as communication, leadership, and resilience. To improve, the statement could better connect personal hobbies to skills relevant to pharmacy and provide more reflection on how specific experiences influenced the decision to pursue pharmacy. Additionally, emphasizing future career goals within pharmacy would strengthen the narrative. Overall, this is a well-rounded personal statement suitable for the new UCAS personal statement format with minor adjustments to enhance clarity and impact.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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