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Personal Statement:Pharmacy 6

This is a real Pharmacy personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Since a very young age I have always enjoyed caring for people and I feel a great sense of achievement helping people. Biology and Chemistry have always been two of my strongest and most enjoyable subjects throughout my academic studies. My interest in the chemistry of life has lead to me deciding that I wish to pursue a degree in the Pharmacy discipline.

I enjoy the application of logical scientific thinking and knowledge of natural laws to analyse and solve problems occurring in Pharmacy.

I am a reliable, determined and enthusiastic person who will relish the opportunity to study pharmacy if I am given the opportunity.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

From my A level work I have gained many key skills which will be beneficial to a career in Pharmacy. Two of the strongest skills that I have been able to develop are my organisation and communication skills which are essential for Pharmacists. Throughout my AS Biology I was able to improve upon my communication skills as I had to deliver a presentation about data for which I had independently recorded on the field trip in Oxford.

As a Pharmacist you do require some skills in mathematics. Maths A level has provided me with the knowledge in analysing and solving problems and from this I have gained sharp numerical skills. With Maths, I am able to calculate the accurate dosage of the drug which is required for the patient in relation to hospital pharmacy.

A levels required a lot of independent work compared to my previous educational years, hence I have learnt to organise myself efficiently. This has helped me to set feasible revision timetables and meet the tight schedules that were presented to me during my A levels. Consequently this has lead to a great improvement in my organisational skills. I believe that these skills are essential and will aid me to become a successful Pharmacy university student.

All of these key skills have enabled me to attain high academic grades constantly throughout my school life thus I have been awarded numerous certificates for achievement.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

I am currently gaining work experience in my local dentist, which I enjoy thoroughly and I am gaining a wonderful insight to the world of Dentistry. I completed two successful weeks of work experience at MG Rover in Longbridge which was very beneficial to me as I was able to improve my communication skills and learn more about the so called "new world". During this time I was involved in a variety of tasks, which included producing a problem resolution action report relating to an investigation I was involved with.

I attended and completed the 'Challenge of Management' course which develops key skills such as communication, planning, problem solving and responsibility, I feel these skills are important and have guided and helped me in my academic studies to-date and will further assist me to become a productive and efficient Pharmacy university student.

I have completed 6 weeks community service at Grestone Primary School. This also allowed me to develop my personal traits, as I have always been keen to help others. Many positive comments were made on my appearance, punctuality, attitude and professional relationships with children.

In my time at Handsworth Grammar School I have assisted at Open Days, Parents' Evenings and 11+ Examinations. My main priorities were showing visitors and potential students around the school to make sure each occasion was run smoothly. I have been awarded certificates of gratitude for such events. I have benefited a great deal from such responsibilities as they have helped me improve upon the quality of my teamwork skills immensely. In addition to this I have also been supporting the Duty Team on Wednesdays, where I have to supervise students coming in to school. This has helped me widen my communication skills amongst both younger and older students.

Outside of school I have many interests which include attending a snooker club once a week as I have an interest in the sport, which also helps to improve my concentration skills. I am currently a member of my leisure centre, which I use regularly due to my passion in keeping fit and healthy. I particularly enjoy sports such as football and badminton. In addition I have been involved in taking part in Punjabi lessons in my local library. As a result of taking part of this I have achieved a certificate for supplementary education attendance certificate.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement provides a clear motivation for studying Pharmacy and demonstrates relevant academic preparation, particularly highlighting skills from Biology, Chemistry, and Maths A levels. The applicant effectively details their communication and organisational skills, supported by examples like their presentation and independent work timelines. The inclusion of work experience and extracurricular activities enriches the narrative and shows the applicant's well-rounded development.

To improve, the statement could benefit from more specific links between experiences and how they directly relate to the demands of a Pharmacy degree. Some sentences could be made clearer and more concise to enhance readability. Additionally, addressing what excites the applicant about the subject beyond skills—such as specific areas of Pharmacy or future career aspirations—would strengthen the personal connection to the course. Overall, this is a strong and structured personal statement suitable for the new UCAS format.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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