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Personal Statement:Physics 1

This is a real Physics personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

To me the application of physics is what makes physics useful and interesting. I find studying physics at A-Levels interesting and challenging, in particular the areas of theory and experimental work.

I now hope to exploit my talent and interest by pursuing a career as a pilot. I have been fascinated by the complexity of aviation and the uses it has provided for people in their lives. Having travelled by aeroplanes my interest in aircraft grew with time. I understand that the road to becoming a qualified pilot is an extremely difficult one.

I am looking forward to the challenge of study at degree level and exploring the opportunities available to students.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

However I am no stranger to hard work as I am working towards completing two very demanding A-levels.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

To gain financial stability in preparation for university I work part time in Marks & Spencer. I wanted a job that would teach me a variety of skills as well as being enjoyable. So I trained to become a supervisor. Becoming a supervisor has taught me how to handle great responsibility, to cope with immense stress and to deal with the general public. This requires me to have excellent time keeping skills, attention to detail and be able to communicate effectively both orally and on paper. The job has also improved my ability to work under pressure and given me the opportunity to be independent using my own initiative.

I also enjoy playing computer games, particularly role-play and adventure games, as they incorporate strategic planning and problem solving. Flight Simulator and Raptor F22 are two of my favourites of this genre.

For recreational purposes, I play cricket to keep fit and healthy.

This also enhances my ability to think competitively and strategically. Good communication, on and off the field is also essential.

I have a very keen interest in current affairs, I like to be kept well informed of national and international social and political issues. I also share a passion for debating topics with my friends, which bring out conflicting opinions, allowing me to express my views assertively yet tactfully. This is supported by a further interest in Islamic History in particular the life of Prophet Mohammed and the Islamic law (shariah).

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement demonstrates a clear passion for physics and a specific career goal in aviation, which is a strong motivator. The applicant effectively links interests and experiences, such as part-time work and strategic gaming, to skills relevant to their ambition. However, the academic preparation section is very brief and could benefit from expanded detail about specific A-level subjects, coursework, or projects that have prepared them for university-level physics study. Including specific achievements or skills gained from physics studies would strengthen the statement. Furthermore, integrating more reflections on how the skills and interests outside of education directly support success in the physics course and pilot career pathway will improve cohesion. Overall, the genuine voice and structured presentation align well with the expectations for new UCAS personal statements from 2026 onwards.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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