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My zealous interest in science was sparked at a very early age, but did not truly come to fruition until I began my GCSEs. From the microscopic interactions between molecules, to the enormous scale and complexity of the universe, science has fuelled my inquisitive nature, allowing my passion for the subject to increase exponentially over the past few years. A-levels in particular have furthered my interests, whetting my appetite for tougher, more challenging theories.
I greatly enjoy studying topics that challenge the way I think and make me look at the world in a different way. Learning about the fundamentals of quantum theory was one of those exciting moments when I realised that the universe is not as simple as it seems and that, in order to truly understand how everything works, one would have to take into consideration these tiny particles and the mechanisms by which they interact with one another. This extraordinary quantum world holds a particular fascination for me; John Gribbin's 'In Search of Schrodinger's Cat' furthered my interests with the introduction to quantum mechanics and the journey that transferred physicists from the cause-and-effect approach of classical physics to the probabilistic nature of modern physics. The mystery surrounding the wave/particle duality is of great interest to me as it allows my imagination to run wild, and yet my rationality to process the ideas logically. Due to its abstract nature, quantum theory is therefore a topic I look forward to learning in greater depth at university.
'A Brief History of Time' is another gripping book, one that further developed my interest in cosmology and introduced me to the intriguing concept of black holes. The Collins 'Advanced Physics' book, on the other hand, gave a similar yet alternative view to the A-level syllabus, providing mathematical proof for some of the more complex ideas and also provided further detail on topics such as particle physics. These two texts gave me an insight and grounding into the fundamentals of space-time and special relativity. In addition to books I have also been reading 'Physics Review' magazines, which provide information on some of the modern-day applications of the A-level syllabus such as the development of Geiger counters.
Having had a glimpse at the extraordinary ideas so abundant in physics, I believe a good imagination will prove a strong asset for me. My love of maths and enthusiasm to learn, motivate me to be the best that I can be. I believe I have the skills, creativity and rationality required to make the most out of the course and university allowing me to gain important life skills along the way.
In the summer holidays I undertook work experience at Salisbury hospital. This demanded good time management and dedication, due to the long working hours. On my last day, an MRSA outbreak meant that the whole team needed to work together to quarantine the infected bay as quickly as possible. This required good teamwork and communication skills and demonstrated the benefits of working together.
Outside of the classroom, I attend a 6th form discussion club that, not only keeps me up to date with the latest news, but also allows me to express my opinion on various issues, with other people. I also enjoy swimming, jogging and tennis. My main hobby, however, is art. I find that sketching and painting helps to maintain my creative state and fuels my imagination, something that I find, helps me to approach complex theories and to picture certain scenarios in my mind leading to deeper understanding.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement clearly conveys a genuine passion for physics, highlighting specific topics and books that have inspired the applicant, which is excellent for demonstrating motivation. To further improve, the applicant could strengthen the middle section by explicitly linking their A-level subjects and results more concretely to the skills and knowledge required for university physics. Additionally, integrating how the outside experiences, especially work experience and hobbies like art, relate directly to their physics studies would enhance coherence and show well-rounded preparation. Maintaining the authentic voice is a strength, but polishing some phrasing for clarity and flow could boost professionalism while keeping the personal tone. Overall, this statement aligns well with the expectations for the new Ucas personal statement format and effectively uses personal anecdotes and reflections.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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