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Personal Statement:Physics 19

This is a real Physics personal statement written by a student for their university application. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Physics is the bizarre and the extraordinary, and covers everything from the huge to the tiny. It uses maths, which I believe to be the language of the universe, to explain everything from the movement of the stars to how an atom can be in two places at once. Growing up, I have striven to understand as much as I can, and I believe physics can give answers to the many questions life offers.

This is why I would love to do physics at university level. I maintain a strong interest in physics and maths outside of school, having participated in a number extra curricular maths courses since year nine, and I have read a number of books about physics. I particularly enjoyed ‘In Search of Schrodinger's Cat’ by John Gribbin, as a lot of it was interlinked with the work we were doing in class – for example, we had used Planck’s constant in many formulae, and this book explained further about how else the constant could be used, how it was calculated, and other discoveries Planck had made. It also linked in with matrix work I had studied in further maths, further unifying the way mathematical tools can explain such advanced phenomena. I have discovered a fascination with the ideas of quantum mechanics and how our universe is rooted in such complex, yet fundamental, rules.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

I have chosen to continue with four A level subjects. As I have advanced in my scientific understanding, it has become clearer to me how physics, chemistry and maths link together and how having a good understanding of one of these subjects is advantageous in the others. I really enjoy studying further maths, especially the further pure modules, as they really stretch my mathematical knowledge and I love working hard to solve a difficult problem. I find physical problems in real life; I often find my mind wondering how I would calculate the distance someone can rock on a chair before they fall, or how much force someone must exert jump a metre off the ground. These problems all have mathematical bases, and the theory behind different aspects of physics is something I find very interesting. I am keenly following the LHC at CERN, as I believe it will provide answers about elusive dark matter and other particles, which will help us understand our universe and ultimately more about the nature of what we are made of.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Outside of school, I have achieved a merit in my grade 8 flute, as well as my grade 5 theory of music, targets which I have worked toward since I began playing in year 3. This shows how dedicated I become to achieving a goal. I also play in a flute choir, and I love how many, perhaps very different, lines of music can blend together to produce something more beautiful than anything one instrument could play. I believe working as a team is important in any aspect of life, and a team working together can achieve more than an individual – which applies to physics just as much as it does to music.

One of the most exciting things I have ever done was my exchange to Japan when I was fifteen. I lived with a Japanese family for ten days, and experiencing such a different culture was incredible. It really enhanced my language skills, and I saw how a different schooling system and culture works. My experience helped me to become more independent and encouraged me to try things – from food to travelling across Tokyo on the tube – that I had never tried before, an attitude I have maintained.

I have two part time jobs, which have given me the opportunity to learn how to manage my finances and time. My waitressing job has shown me how best to relate to people, a vital interpersonal skill. I have babysat for the same family for five years, and I have developed a strong sense of responsibility, and found out how to order my time to keep others happy.

Physics is a subject which truly fascinates me and I look forward to studying more advanced, and more exciting, topics at a higher level.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

  • The personal statement effectively expresses a genuine passion for physics and related mathematical concepts, showing clear motivation for the subject.
  • Including detailed examples like reading 'In Search of Schrodinger's Cat' and following CERN’s LHC adds depth and originality.
  • The linkage of physics with other sciences and further maths demonstrates an integrated understanding that admissions tutors value.
  • The applicant’s experiences outside education, such as music achievements, cultural exchange, and part-time jobs, convincingly showcase transferable skills like teamwork, independence, responsibility, and time management.
  • To improve, the statement could benefit from fewer clichéd phrases (e.g., "the language of the universe") and more explicit connections between experiences and the applicant’s suitability for university-level physics.
  • Adding any specific achievements in physics competitions or projects could strengthen the academic preparation section.
  • Overall, this is a strong personal statement well adapted for the new UCAS personal statement format and aligned with best practices for 2026 applications.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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