This is a real Psychology personal statement written by a student for their university application to University of Bolton (Criminological and Forensic Psychology), Chester (Psychology with Criminology), Liverpool John Moores (Forensic Psychology and Criminal Justice), Newport (Psychology/Criminal & Community Justice) and Bangor (Criminology/Psychology). It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
My interest in Psychology and social science is the motivation for me applying to study Psychology and Criminology. Psychology is my favourite subject and I have thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of the A-Level course.
The career I am hoping to go into once I’ve finished the course would be to join the police force or within prisons as a forensic psychologist. I am very interested in helping reform criminals whilst inside prison and on parole and have always been interested to find out how the criminal mind works and why they committed the crime. This course will lead me into this career and open up many opportunities to work with and help criminals.
I believe that university will provide me with the opportunity to develop as a person. I am hard working, intellectually curious and determined to be successful. I look forward to the new experiences and opportunities, university will provide me with and guarantee to participate whenever possible.
In addition to Psychology I have also studied Sociology, Photography and Film Studies. Studying Psychology has given me a more in-depth understanding of human behaviour and interaction, which I can relate into everyday life. Studying Sociology has enhanced my understanding of the society we live in and how it functions. These subjects have demanded commitment and time management and have improved my comprehension and analytical skills.
Participation in clubs and work placements has enabled me to develop key character attributes. When on work experience at a junior school I was able to advance my communicative skills, this allowed me to teach children to read and to express themselves using paragraphs and grammar correctly. Whilst working as a Recreation Assistant I have become more confident with working around both adults and children; I have learnt valuable people and observational skills. A few years ago I joined St John Cadets where I have learnt first aid skills. Through structured interviews and presentations I was chosen to represent North East Wales to compete for cadet of the year. I am also a black belt in karate and have helped others improve their technique.
I have enjoyed an active role in school life. Whilst at ****** School I was appointed as Prefect and I was nominated by my peers to act as Form Captain. As a result I was trusted to voice the beliefs of my peers and hence I have developed key people skills. In addition, I have helped to organise sports day, the harvest festival and school open days.
In my spare time I enjoy reading; my favourite books include: ‘The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night time’, books by Dan Brown and ‘Harry Potter’. I also enjoy swimming, going to my local gym, walking and socialising.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement clearly expresses a strong motivation for studying Psychology and Criminology and connects academic interests to career goals, which is a great strength. The applicant effectively highlights relevant academic preparations and valuable extracurricular experiences that develop transferable skills. To improve, the statement could benefit from deeper reflection on how specific skills learned connect directly to university study and a more cohesive narrative flow. Including specific achievements or project examples from A-Level studies would provide stronger evidence of academic preparedness. Additionally, some more detail on why particular universities or courses were chosen would help tailor the statement for admissions tutors. Overall, it is a well-rounded personal statement demonstrating passion and commitment.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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