Psychology degree personal statement example (0a) King's application

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

It began with a fascination with advertisements on television. I recall watching these and wondering why certain things would influence me to buy products. This curiosity deepened as I began to question broader aspects of behaviour: why people act the way they do and what factors shape their decisions. My interest in behavioural and cognitive science emerged from this quest to understand human nature, motivating me to study Psychology.

Psychology intrigues me as a field that is dynamic and ever-changing, with ongoing research shaping and reshaping existing beliefs and theories. With a heavy interest in research, I aim to embark on a journey that allows me to explore psychological research and its application in the real world.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

To learn more, I enrolled in an Introduction to Psychology course from Yale University. The content provided me with a holistic view of psychology's foundations through Piaget’s stages of cognitive development, Freud’s psychoanalytic theory, and Skinner’s behaviourism. The fragility of Freud’s theories and lack of external validity became increasingly obvious as I learnt more. While the course offered a thorough exploration of psychoanalysis and developmental psychology, it left me with lingering questions about cognitive psychology. This sparked my desire to further explore cognitive processes, particularly in relation to how we make decisions and what influences them.

My interest grew as I began reading literature on the topic, which led to my Extended Essay on the effect of social proof in influencing consumer behaviour. Academic journals as well as ‘Influence’ by Robert Cialdini provided background knowledge on my topic and I was able to understand the six principles Cialdini narrows persuasion down to but found it to be a reductionist view. My research aided me in understanding that the type of product or service offered leads to a great degree of variation in reasons for purchase. This variability disallows current research from having implications further than the product that was being tested within the experiment. Filling this gap would require research that tests multiple products and factors to overcome lacking external applicability.

My Psychology IA allowed me to hone my field skills as I led my research group in designing and conducting an experiment investigating the evolutionary link between facial symmetry and perceived attractiveness. We manipulated photographs to have high and low facial symmetry and asked the sample to rate perceived attractiveness, comparing the two conditions. This introduced me to research methodology, ethical guidelines, and the importance of ensuring internal and external validity. I also completed a Mathematics IA which involved modelling memory retention using a logistic function. Inspired by Baddeley’s 1975 study, I critically evaluated and modified their experiment, providing a mathematical explanation for theoretical concepts. The process strengthened my data analysis skills and gave me hands-on experience in interpreting psychological phenomena through a quantitative lens.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

In the Psychology Club, after a year as a member, I took on a leadership role, restructuring the club to make sessions more interactive. We discussed a wider range of topics, including mental health in educational institutions and workplaces, and I spearheaded initiatives for Mental Health Week, creating awareness posters to promote mental health resources. This helped me develop organisational and communication skills while fostering a collaborative environment for exploring psychology’s real-world applications. On a field trip to the UN in Geneva, I took part in a workshop with Ms. Joyce Mutiso, a UNICEF specialist in child protection with experience working in conflict-ridden areas, which reinforced the value of applying psychological theory to real-world problems, particularly in supporting vulnerable communities.

Universities applied to:

• LSE (Psychological and Behavioural Sciences)
• King’s College London (Psychology)
• University of Bristol (Psychology)
• University of Bath (Psychology)
• University of St Andrews (Psychology)

Grades achieved:

• IB 40/45
• HL: 776 for Psychology, Business, English: Language and Literature

How personal statements have changed?

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