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I am a people’s person. I am passionately interesting in listening to people’s problem and finding strategies to help solve them. In everyday life people go through difficulties that make life impossible to them to live. There is a saying that says a service is only as good as the person who delivered the service. I want to be that person who delivered a good service to people who needs it. Through studying subjects like psychology, sociology, and abnormal psychology I can satisfy my interest in some of the problems that affect people and how society influences people’s actions or behaviour, especially abnormal psychology that looks at the way people are characterised in society and what possible behaviour they need to show to get professional help. In society, people in various stages of life are facing different problems, like abuse, disabilities and mental illness. Some live in residential homes or with their families and sometimes struggle to get the right facilities or treatment they deserve.
Presently in my Access class, I was elected as a class representative after giving a speech to convince the class that I am capable of the post. My ethnic origin and cultural awareness have allowed me to be very sociable and interactive. I am interested in reading real-life stories about children who have been abused by their families or someone outside their family. I go to the gym and church to release some stress; however, I enjoy the opportunity to make new friends, interacting with people from different backgrounds and levels in life as it is a different environment. I enjoy socialising with people so much that when I went to college I became a class representative.
As an applicant I am very respectful, open minded and non-judgmental. Therefore, I believe in equal opportunity and am always ready to challenge any unfair discrimination. I am highly motivated, enthusiastic and persuasive towards education, especially towards this particular subject as it is my dream profession.
Currently I am a parent and a support worker for learning disability. Some of my responsibilities are maintaining individual privacy and confidentiality, supporting them to cope with their daily life, organising daily activities, encouraging them to make quality decisions that will enable them to gain more privacy within their home, supporting them to college which helps them develop new skills/improve their skills, and communicating effectively with other professionals when needed.
I was a care assistant for three months assisting elderly people in a residential home. I was also a primary teacher for kids aged 5-6 years in West Africa, Sierra Leone, Freetown, where I taught subjects like Maths, English, Art and Craft, Sport, Rhythms, and Religious education. During those periods some of my responsibilities were setting targets and goals to achieve and complete academic syllabus, organising school trips, preparing notes for lessons and making sure that aims and objectives of the lessons were met.
Currently I am enjoying my Access course and it has developed my curiosity, therefore I feel it is an excellent preparation to further my studies in university and become a social worker.
In my role as a support worker and parent, I have gained valuable experience supporting people with learning disabilities, which has enhanced my skills in maintaining confidentiality, encouraging independence, and effective communication with professionals. These experiences have deepened my understanding of the challenges faced by vulnerable people and the importance of quality social care.
Outside of education and work, I like reading real-life stories about children who have been abused, which helps me understand the realities some people face. I also go to the gym and church to manage stress and enjoy socialising with people from different backgrounds, which has helped me develop good interpersonal skills and cultural awareness. This sociability and my ability to interact widely were recognised when I was elected class representative in my Access class.
These experiences have helped me discover my personality and abilities, making me more determined to face challenging situations in both work and academic life. I believe the dedication, patience, and commitment I have shown so far will help me succeed in social work, a vocational and professional course where I am eager to contribute positively to people’s lives.
The main problem with this statement is the fact that it does not demonstrate that the author is applying for a professional course, and doesn't show their understanding of the role and how they are suitable for it. Some of the comments need to be more detailed/focused on social work, and it would be good to have an idea of what field the author would like to work in.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement shows genuine passion for helping people and relevant experience working with vulnerable groups, which are significant strengths. However, it would be improved by providing clearer links between these experiences and the social work profession, particularly highlighting understanding of the role and responsibilities of a social worker. The statement would benefit from refining language to avoid clichés and generalisations, and adding more reflection on how past roles have prepared the applicant for the challenges of social work. Including a specific area of interest within social work and illustrating commitment through concrete examples or personal anecdotes would also strengthen the impact. Attention to sentence clarity, grammar, and structure will improve overall readability. Focusing on the vocational nature of social work and the applicant’s suitability for this professional career in line with the new UCAS personal statement format recommendations is advised.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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