This is a real Sports science personal statement written by a student for their university application to Brighton University. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
When I was sixteen years old, after completing my Junior Certificate, (Irish equivalent of GCSE's), I made plans to do my Leaving Certificate and go on to University. However life did not produce as planned. I found myself working in dead end jobs and suffering severe job dissatisfaction I found myself saying: 'If only I'd...'
I initially applied to study Molecular Medicine at another university but having spoken to a recent graduate of Brighton University's and researched into the subject area myself, I came to realise that I had made a misconception of what exercise science involves and the wrong choices about my future. This is why I have chosen Sport Science/ Exercise Science. I am now definite and clear about the choices I want to make.
I have an obvious interest in science, especially nutrition and research. It is my wish to have the widest possible knowledge on sport / exercise science along with physical education.
I have chosen to study Sport Science for various reasons. I believe that it is the health degree of the future and I have an interest in nutrition and I am keen to learn how nutrition in sport can be advantageous, if not crucial in competition. Also, I feel that completing my PGCE whilst at Brighton could broaden my skills and employability as well as teaching others the importance of exercise and healthy lifestyles. My future plans are to complete a BSc in Sport/Exercise science then after graduating with an honours degree it is my ambition to continue studying at postgraduate level. I am confident in doing so.
I want to enjoy university life and there is no question in my motivation and enthusiasm, and look forward to a challenging and satisfying course that offers me so much variety.
I am currently completing an Access to Science course at Sussex Downs College. This course will equip me with a strong scientific background and develop my interpersonal skills such as team working, as well as biomechanics and sport science, chemistry, methodology, psychology, mathematics and many others. I am positive that I have the communication and organizational skills and personal qualities required to pursue my academic ambition.
I enjoy keeping my Spanish language skills up to date, travel and learning new skills. Since acquiring a back injury whilst horse riding, my levels of activity have unfortunately had to lower to swimming, power-walking and running. Other academic interests include reading, I am currently reading "Genome, The Autobiography of a Species," by Matt Ridley.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively conveys a genuine and evolving motivation toward studying Sport Science. The clear reflection on past experiences and changing ambitions strengthens the applicant's narrative. To improve, the statement could benefit from a more detailed description of specific skills and achievements in relevant subjects and further exploration of extracurricular activities linked to sport science. Clarifying future academic goals and integrating more coherent transitions between paragraphs would enhance flow and coherence. Additionally, minimizing minor grammatical issues and informal phrasing will make the statement more professional while preserving the applicant's authentic voice.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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