This is a real Travel and tourism personal statement written by a student for their university application to University of Chester, Staffordshire University, University of Northampton, University of Central Lancashire and Cardiff Metropolitan University. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
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My interest in Travel and Tourism stems from early holidays with family and friends. I have been fortunate enough to visit various cities around the world including Las Vegas, Rhodes and Frankfurt and this has encouraged me to see more of the world, experiencing as many different cultures and landscapes as possible. My sixth form studies have made me more aware of the business aspect of the industry and I would like to gain a greater insight to allow me to pursue a career in this area. Being an ambitious and hardworking individual I feel that I would be ideally suited to the growing and changing world of tourism.
In the future, I would like to complete my higher education in my chosen subject and move overseas. I am looking forward to University life and all it has to offer, and I fully intend to take advantage of the facilities and societies on offer at the University.
My Edexcel BTEC Level 3 Diploma in Travel and Tourism has allowed me to study a range of different modules. The two modules I have found most interesting were 'the business of travel and tourism' and 'customer service in travel and tourism'. Finding out the realities of how these businesses are run has been fascinating and I feel that good customer service is the key to a successfully run company. I have also attended a summer course in which I achieved Level 2 NVQ Delivery of Effective Customer Service and BSC Level 1 Award in Health and Safety at Work. This shows that I am a dedicated and motivated person that understands and aspires to have a successful future.
Throughout my Travel and Tourism studies I have acquired a number of important skills. Independent research skills have been necessary to successfully complete assignments as they encourage you to search the media for certain information and statistics. Report writing and presentation skills have also been developed throughout my time at Sixth Form, both of which have helped me to achieve my target grades. Studying Psychology at A-Level has allowed me to develop skills in time management and prioritising work due to the high course content and essay based exam work. The course content has given me a better understanding of human behaviour, which will help me when covering modules on customer service and when putting this skill into practise.
Working as a theatre steward and as a staff member at the Catalyst Museum has developed my skills of team working and customer service. The Catalyst Museum is a successful business that relies on the hard work and professionalism of its staff to keep its youthful target audience happy. I am currently a volunteer staff member for Rogue Events, a Europe wide events management company. As part of my involvement I have to interact with people from all over the world and help those if they have any questions or queries, ranging from customers to special guests we have at the event. As a member of the organisation team I have had to develop strong problem solving abilities to ensure that events run smoothly for visitors and have been able to gain an insight as to how the events are run including the business side.
As well as being committed to further education in my chosen career, I enjoy an active lifestyle attending different social events with my family and friends. Due to the skills I have gained I am generally the organiser of these events and I excel at the booking process including the organisation and travel arrangements. These skills also proved useful when organising personal trips throughout Europe.
Results day came, and though I was super happy with my Tourism grade, I was a little disappointed with my Psychology. Though it was not something to worry about as Chester changed my offer to Unconditional, which meant I'd gotten my firm place in my favourite University. I start in September 2014 and I couldn't be happier.
I spent hours upon hours researching and making this statement. I spent a good 2 weeks looking at examples on The Student Room, taking on points on what other people had written. I sat in my college library and looked through UCAS help guides, jotting down important information on the Dos/Don'ts when it comes to your personal statement. It was the best thing I could have done. After making my first drafts, I sent it to countless people, asking for their opinion and what they would change. After about 20 checks, I had my final draft. Letting my tutor have the last look over, it was ready to be sent off and I was more than happy with it. So my advice to people is to research as much as you can before you write, and show it to as many people you can manage.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement effectively communicates a genuine interest in travel and tourism, illustrated by personal travel experiences and a strong motivation to pursue a career in the field. The inclusion of relevant educational achievements and coursework, along with vocational qualifications, strengthens the preparedness for university study.
To improve, the candidate could enhance clarity and impact by breaking up some longer paragraphs and varying sentence structures for better flow. More explicit linking between personal skills developed and how they will contribute to success in the specific university course could also add depth. Finally, considering the 2026 UCAS format, explicitly addressing how university offerings (such as particular modules or facilities) match career goals would be beneficial.
Overall, the statement is well-rounded, with authentic enthusiasm and practical experience, making it a solid foundation for a strong personal statement under the new Ucas format.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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