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Personal Statement:Veterinary medicine 25 - The Student Room

This is a real Veterinary science and medicine personal statement written by a student for their university application to Royal Veterinary College, Edinburgh, Nottingham, Bristol and Nottingham. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.

This statement has been reviewed by one of The Student Room's personal statement reviewers, and their feedback is included below.

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Advancements in Veterinary Medicine affect every aspect of modern life. Although many live unaware of how meat is assured for consumption, how zoonotic diseases are controlled and monitored, or how the definition of “veterinarian” encompasses more than addressing ailments in domesticated pets, its intrinsic position in society is clear. My desire to become a vet not only stems from my love of animals; undertaking work experience at IDEXX laboratories in the haematology, biochemistry, microbiology, histology and pathology departments gave me an insight into veterinary diagnostics that was fascinating.

Veterinary Medicine requires commitment, resilience and determination - qualities I believe I constantly exhibit. The opportunity to study this subject brings wealth, not in money, but in life. Through its practice we help to reverse the effects of human ignorance and educate, so that animals do not suffer in the future. I am under no illusions about the demands of the course but I believe this profession is one to which I am eminently suited.

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Every Wednesday evening since September 2013 I have worked at a farm where I am responsible for milking and feeding the calves. I thoroughly enjoy my time among the livestock learning about their care, their illnesses and assisting with calving and farrowing. Spending a week there delivering lambs, often unassisted, was highly rewarding. Having witnessed and treated Mastitis in the dairy herd, the prevalent nature of the disease inspired my Extended Project which focused on assessing the management of the disease. This qualification has improved my research skills, time management and my ability to convey complex information to someone with no familiarity with the subject.

I have aided an animal behaviourist with puppy training classes every Thursday since September 2012. This has advanced my knowledge of body language which I employ when dealing with frightened and aggressive pets each Saturday in an small animal practice. I restrain the inpatients for administration of medication and general assessments as well as being accountable for the preparation of meals, exercising the patients and the hygiene of the kennel room. My curiosity regarding the cases prompts me to independently research their illnesses and treatments.

Having spent two weeks in a small animal practice and watching The Blue Cross operate at a shelter I have realised that not all operations are routine. Often a veterinarian has to show flexibility and resolve in undertaking complicated surgery. Such a situation arose when the owners of a dog with dry eye declared they could not manage the application of artificial tears or cyclosporine, and therefore the decision was made to perform a parotid duct transposition to provide lubrication.

During a week’s placement at a stable yard and another at an equine practice, I have become more familiar with horses and the maladies they are susceptible to. I learnt how poor performance can be attributed to gastric ulcers, how that can be investigated via gastric endoscopy and I was able to observe the castration of a colt with a retained testicle.

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Deputy Head Girl is a role I have fully immersed myself in. Working with the Sixth Form Management Team I have addressed prospective students, participated in careers events and actively canvassed Sixth Form students’ for their input to improve the College. This has developed my confidence, extended interpersonal skills and has afforded me opportunities to work as part of a team; much like in a practice environment.

Furthermore I organised a charity project for a local animal shelter, creating a presentation and video about its residents to encourage 2,000 secondary school pupils to donate food and toys. In my spare time I have taught myself to play guitar and ukulele. Music helps me to relax and in recent years I have attended over fifty live musical performances.

Universities applied to:

  • Royal Veterinary College
  • Edinburgh
  • Nottingham
  • Bristol
  • Nottingham

Grades achieved:

  • Biology (A2) - A*
  • Chemistry (A2) - A
  • Maths (A2) - A
  • English Literature and Language (AS) - A
  • EPQ (AS) - A

Expert feedback from The Student Room personal statement reviewer

I was very happy with how my personal statement turned out, and I did write all of it myself. When I submitted it to my college they wanted to change it but I didn't allow them to, irregardless of whether they would've made it better, I wanted it to come across as me, as it's important the university got a feel for who I was.

AI generated feedback

This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:

This personal statement is strong due to its clear passion for veterinary medicine and extensive relevant work experience, which demonstrates commitment and hands-on learning. The applicant effectively illustrates their understanding of the profession’s breadth and challenges, adding depth with specific anecdotes such as the parotid duct transposition case and lambing work. To improve for the 2026 UCAS structure, consider enhancing the flow by directly linking personal experiences to course-relevant skills and explicitly reflecting on how these prepare you for academic and professional success. Further clarity in separating academic qualifications from extracurricular activities and a more pronounced conclusion about future aspirations could strengthen the impact. Overall, the authentic voice and detailed examples make it a compelling and personable personal statement aligned with the new UCAS requirements.

How personal statements have changed?

The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.

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