This is a real Veterinary science and medicine personal statement written by a student for their university application to University Of Bristol Veterinary Medicine, University Of Nottingham, University Of Liverpool and University Of Edinburgh. It has been carefully edited into the new three-question format, with all of the original wording kept. It may have strengths and weaknesses, but it can be used as inspiration for writing your own UCAS personal statement. Ensure your personal statement is entirely your own work, copying from this example or other sources is considered plagiarism and can affect your application. There are lots more examples in our collection of sample personal statements.
The hours are long and animals in distress bite, kick and scratch, but this has not diminished my long standing ambition to pursue a career in veterinary medicine. On the contrary, the 'hands on' aspect highlights the wondrous diversity of the animal world and emphasises the essential contribution that the profession makes to owners, industry and most importantly animal welfare.
Observing veterinary practice has given me an insight into the great breadth and variety of the veterinary industry. From clinical research, small and large animal practices and industrial abattoir experiences, the versatility of the career has been emphasised.
Despite the demands of a career in veterinary medicine, 26 weeks of work experience has shown me many rewarding and exciting aspects. Life saving operations such as the removal of a tumour from a Great Dane introduced me to the importance of early clinical diagnosis and the benefits it can have on an animal's quality of life. Treating soft tissue problems through interleukin-1 receptor antagonist proteins and collecting blood test samples for metabolic disease at Abbey Equine Clinic has demonstrated recent developments in the veterinary profession.
Bristol Zoo Veterinary Department was very different from the other veterinary practices. It was intriguing to conduct post mortems on monkey brains for research. It also introduced me to the different diseases that affect exotic species; a specific case being Aspergillus. A seahorse case with buoyancy problems resolvable by surgery was fascinating. It showed me the diverse anatomy and physiology of exotic species.
The significance and value of a vet in a rural community was highlighted by my week lambing, a week at a dairy and four weeks on a farm. My time at Wern Farm strengthened my restraining techniques when worming the animals as well as the general husbandry required to keep them healthy. My most exciting moment was during lambing as, although I witnessed the rejection of lambs by ewes, delivering a lamb was an exhilarating experience. Observing the process from the birth pen to the field highlighted the importance of hygiene on farms at this time of year. My experiences showed me the dilemma when balancing commercial and welfare aspects in farming.
The essential involvement a vet has on the community and the significant impact they have on lives is the only incentive I need.
Observing veterinary practice has given me an insight into the great breadth and variety of the veterinary industry. Assisting in euthanasias over two years at Monow Bridge Veterinary Clinic highlighted ethically and emotionally challenging decisions veterinary surgeons make. Here, I learnt about the importance of communication with the owner to ensure they knew all options available. Witnessing animals being killed humanely in an abattoir helped me realise I can be emotionally detached, ensuring I am prepared for all aspects of veterinary medicine.
Throughout this diversity one constant did emerge - the importance of administrative paperwork, which accompanies every procedure, most notably observed during the regulation of passport checks for identification in the abattoir.
Working at Usk Large Animal Veterinary Clinic introduced me to treatments for uterus infections in cattle as well as the importance of TB testing.
Life saving operations such as the removal of a tumour from a Great Dane introduced me to the importance of early clinical diagnosis and the benefits it can have on an animal's quality of life.
Treating soft tissue problems through interleukin-1 receptor antagonist proteins and collecting blood test samples for metabolic disease at Abbey Equine Clinic has demonstrated recent developments in the veterinary profession.
Bristol Zoo Veterinary Department introduced me to different diseases that affect exotic species and conducting post mortems on monkey brains for research helped deepen my understanding. A seahorse case with buoyancy problems resolvable by surgery was fascinating, showing me the diverse anatomy and physiology of exotic species.
My time at Wern Farm strengthened my restraining techniques when worming the animals as well as the general husbandry required to keep them healthy.
Responsibilities as Head Girl and year 7 mentor have helped improve my leadership and communication skills, vital when dealing with emotional owners in difficult situations.
Organising events in the Charity Committee and taking AS level Science in Society a year early, whilst juggling a job as a waitress, have developed my time management, team work and empathy skills.
Scuba diving and winter skiing are relaxing distractions from academia and allow me to explore the natural world.
I am an extremely dedicated and highly motivated student who has the desire and commitment to help animals and their owners in the veterinary profession.
This feedback is AI-generated, based on the text of this personal statement:
This personal statement demonstrates a clear and genuine passion for veterinary medicine, enriched by extensive work experience across diverse veterinary settings, which effectively showcases the applicant's preparedness for the course. The applicant’s reflection on ethical and emotional challenges, as well as technical skills learned, provides valuable insight and depth. However, to align with the new UCAS personal statement format for 2026 and beyond, the candidate could improve coherence by reducing some repetition, especially between sections 1 and 2, ensuring each section distinctively addresses the specific prompt.
Adding a brief introduction sentence for each new section could enhance readability and structure, helping admissions tutors follow the applicant’s narrative more easily. Additionally, more detail linking qualifications directly to specific skills or knowledge used in veterinary contexts would strengthen the second section. The inclusion of personal anecdotes and extracurricular activities enriches the third section well, but linking these more explicitly to the development of relevant skills such as teamwork and resilience could further improve impact.
Overall, this is a strong personal statement with vivid examples and heartfelt motivation; tightening the focus and explicitly framing content according to the new UCAS heading requirements will maximize its effectiveness.
The current personal statement format, with three 'scaffolding' questions, was introduced by Ucas in September 2025. This personal statement was submitted before then, using the old essay-style format. It has been carefully edited into the three-question format, with all of the original wording kept.
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